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Look,
can you see how
the sky
appears slow
and so
deliberate ..
Like someone
as yet
undecided
which way to go ..
Yet still,
with so many
monsters
just beginning
to emerge
around midnight
Is it really
any wonder
we are
all so very
hungry by midday ..
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Your poem paints a vivid picture of the sky and its slow, deliberate movements. The imagery of monsters emerging at midnight is striking and adds depth to the piece. The connection between these images and the hunger by midday is thought-provoking. It is such a great piece with a unique perspective!
What an absolute delight to have you visit and grace this page Cloie many thanks indeed .. Neville
Oh My God! That is so sweet of you, Thank you!
The Chocolate Monster always gets me.
I reckon you just enjoy the chase and let yourself get caught .. 🤍
I could actually name so may chocolate treats I so do miss being away from home and how many of them I'd love to eat right now, I'd also settle for the milk tray man too. lol oh Nev, my nostalgia of home just kicked in all it took was the on tray 🌹 thank you.
I wonder if you recall that old classic movie Cathy Come Home .. I do and hereby propose a re-make with you headlining .. Teddy Come Home has such an authentic ring to it don't you think ..
cheers 🌹
Neville
Flights are so high even with vueling 😢 no matter Italian chocolate is fabulous. Never heard or seen the film Cathy come home but I'm going to see if I can find it on YouTube or wicki. Teddy come home 😭 it's incredible even after all these years I choke myself up when I read poems that remind me of my earlier life. Thank you dear Nev, moreover for understanding and for your compassion. ❤️
Taking the time difference between us, it's your mid-day. And fortunately it's my morning as I couldn't wait for my mid-day. 😉👍
Snax for reminding me & for the thumbs up AP .. 😉👍
Is it the Honey Monster? No it's..... oh you know by now! lol.
it was meant to be a metaphor .. okay .. so what else is a meta for eh' ..
Sharp and vivid imagery. Powerful work my friend.
Sweet, just wait till I get my teeth into dessert .. N
It all depends how big a breakfast you have Neville. LOL
Andy
Mines a full English but hold the sausages .. or does that make it either sacrilege & invalid .. Cheers 🙂
Now there are munchies and munchies. I prefer the chocolate sort. The taste of chocolate can certainly give me a high.Look where I drifted with your lines Neville. Good sunny day to ya.
I hope you aint under the influence .. I got two cancellations back on back later .. bell me if you wanna talk about them afflictions .. 💜
Neva touch the stuff, though I know plenty who do or have. Your cancellations can go to the needy:)💜
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