Often
I sit and reflect
just why it is
that two beautiful people
who give everything
and more to love...
rarely, ever find each other?
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: well, i did say rarely. 🤣
- Category: Love
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A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is it because in this world of billions the odds of finding one match is so small? Poignant and well stated.
Ah, I got you thinking too, and what about when they do meet and one gets ripped away by death. damn love is a great discussion on so many levels. Thank you my dear sorrenbarret always appreciate your presence. 🌹
A very poignant poem, Teddy.
Thank you Tom. 🌹
'Tis because, as a grumpy old bugger, I believe that most poets don't be within a bum's scratch of working out wot 'love' really is..... I kno I shouldn't a writ this... I just kno I shouldn't... I kno (fades quickly towards the horizon never to be heard...of...again...)
lol fabulous Dave, exactly my point. Thank you. Grumpy away. 💜 Sending you a Florentine heart just to give you more of the grumps. 😆
Confirming grumps: most of them Florentine hearts are gold according to Prof. Google.... Gold is forever.... oh nah - that's diamonds for ladies; I'll stick with gold if you don't mind...except all those curves on the heart are quite difficult to store so something square and large will do nicely thanks....
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Love works in mysterious ways Teddy. Patience is rule #1. 😊👍
Ah, we must tell that to Romeo and Juliet dear A.P lol 🌹
Do you have their email or cell #? 😉👍
Algebra drives me crazy, as does love. Tremendous work.
lol great answer dear Thomas thank you so much Sir. 🌹
Teddy
I love how you say so much with so few words
An artist of the highest order
Dearest Peto that's high praise for my poem today, thank you so much. 🌹
One on one = babies .. dunno why I wrote that .. maybe it was just a math thing .. or was it that you asked the billion dollar question .. 🌹
Ah ha 🤣 a billion dollar question ❓ awe thank you my dear Neville. 🌹
Sometimes, they find one another and it lasts forever. They would tell you how very fortunate they were. Romeo and Juliet lasted a lifetime.
Loved your little mind- bending poem - Phil A.
Thank you dearest Phil, lovely to see you Sir. 🌹
It does happen sometimes Teddy, Mary and I found each other.
Andy
I know that is why I have written (rarely) and I'm so forever happy you too did find eachother. 🌹 Thank you dear Andy.
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