seven weird kids in a row
one jumped there are six to go
six strange kids in a row
one put a bullet in their head there are five more to go
five sad kids in a row
one put their head in the water there are four to go
four angry kids in a row
one didn't eat there are three to go
three miserable kids in a row
one took a pill there are two to go
two depressed kids in a row
one wore a necklace of rope there is one to go
one suicidal kid left in a row
she slit her wrist cause no one told her no.
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Author:
Karley (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I got this poem from Suicide Notes its a awesome book, I just changed it some. Full credit to Michael Thomas Ford for the original poem I just revised it lol.
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Comments3
It’s not easy to digest
Yeah sorry about that. This is was a impulse poem on how I felt. So I decided to leave it as is.
Wasn’t a criticism. Art needs to lie where it lies.
Oh thank you.
The necklace of rope is an amazing line
Dunno how much you changed but it is a stunning write
I changed the wording and the deaths.
But yes thank you I forgot to say that sorry!
Very welcome
I see where you change it.And Imma say I think it's really good.
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