let there always
always be
this glare from sunlight
on the sea
that lifts all spirits
in distress
that calms and soothes
all restlessness
to sprinkle sparkle
where the mood
of brooding clouds
have done their best
to hamper thoughts
of happiness
to sink the soul
beneath the waves
into the oceans
darkest caves
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Light is always there for us all Cassie, some just do not realise it is there for them.
Andy
Hello Andy. You are right. Sadly some do not see it. Such a loss. Many thanks for stopping by. Have a good Monday.
every once in every while a perfect poem comes along and makes my old heart smile .. this is one of them gems ..
Neville
You are so generous Neville. Thank you my friend. Have a good week.
Very beautiful write!
Thank you Alan. I appreciate you. Have a great Monday.
And let there always always be
A pen by your side
Loved the weather and mood swings
Clever writing
Thank you so much peto. I appreciate your encouragement. Have a good Monday.
As always, wonderful ✍️
Many thanks for stopping by John. Have a good Monday.
And may I say fabulous you have just calmed every last nerve I have. Your imagery wrapped up in so little words a huge impact dearest Cassie58. Merci beaucoup. I hope that is correct french? ❤️
Your French Teddy is perfect. Thank you so much for a lovely comment. Your encouragement is most appreciated. Have a good Monday 🌹
There is a beautiful rhyming pattern and cadence to this poem, it flows like the waves of your sea. Sunlight on water is always mesmerizing, and you capture the emotion perfectly!
Your review Bella is most encouraging. Thank you so much for stopping by. Have a good week.
Beautiful poem Cassie58.
"let there always
always be
this glare from sunlight
on the sea
that lifts all spirits"
Many thanks Meera for a beautiful review. I appreciate your thoughts. Have a good Monday.
Your oblique hint at SAD (Seasonal Affective Disorder) and it's cure has never been better advised. Please return to the others above for more perfect acclamations of the richness of your poetry, Cassie.
Ah yes SAD afflicts many. You are so right Dave. Thank you for stopping by. I appreciate your thoughts. Have a good week.
Paints a clear and thoughtful picture. Well done!
Thank you so much hzugman for stopping by to share your thoughts. I appreciate you. Have a good week.
Beautiful imagery. Tremendous work.
Thank you Thomas. I appreciate your thoughts. Have a good week.
into the oceans darkest caves, very deep and heartfelt writing. I really enjoyed this poem, thank you
Many thanks sunshine777. I appreciate you stopping by. Pleased you enjoyed my poem.
Soothing and beautiful,
Cassie, have a sweet night
Thank you so much Reynaldo. 6.30 am where I am in the UK. All good wishes to you.
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