Dancing In The Rain Tanka.

Goldfinch60



The rain is raining,

I walk slowly in the wet,

Then I start dancing,

Dancing in the rain with joy

As my skin is waterproof.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2024 02:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: A Tanka is a 5,7,5,7,7 syllable layout.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 20
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Was the rain still wet millions of years ago? I forget.

    • Goldfinch60

      It often was Orchi.

      Andy

    • David Wakeling

      Good fun poem. Well constructed.Excellent

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you David, much appreciated.

        Andy

      • Accidental Poet

        As Eric Clapton once said, "Let it rain, Let it rain, Rain down on me"
        Great write Andy. 😊👍

        • Goldfinch60

          So he did, thank you AP.

          Andy

        • Meera Mere

          Beautiful poem. I have always wished to dance in rain but that second hand embarrassment, I have never danced lol.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Doin your Gene Kelly here made for an entertaining interlude, Andy.

          • Goldfinch60

            Glad it has Dave. I have seen that film many times, great film.

            Andy

          • Thomas W Case

            Great use of the senses. I feel this one.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Thomas, much appreciated.

              Andy



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