Up mine

sorenbarrett

When paddling up shit creek is your vacation scenic wonder

When it is uphill, coming and going, face in wind and rain

When the tail you grabbed turns into a tiger blunder

When in a tunnel, the light ahead is an oncoming train

 

Recognize you're the butt of life's joke

The locomotive in that tunnel called your ass

sounds its whistle but is only blowing smoke

Join the crowd and with sass, laugh with balls of brass

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 19th, 2024 21:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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Comments6

  • Bragee

    Nobody can successfully ridicule one laughs at himself first

    • sorenbarrett

      thanks so much. Your words so true/ Appreciate the read and the comment.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good fun words soren.

      Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Andy appreciate the read and kind words

      • orchidee

        I don't fancy the scenery up that creek! lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Orchi me neither.

        • Teddy.15

          Up yours? LoL this is fabulous I feel like this most days. This is so wonderful , hey I'm one of those who see the funny side of everything, Italians don't really get it though. 🌹 Fabulous one of my new favourite faves of yours lol 😆

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Teddy appreciate the read and most kind comment

          • Thomas W Case

            Fantastic. Laughter, the best medicine.

          • Christina8

            I love it!! So clever and I needed a laugh. Thanks!



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