Slumberbashing with Imagery

Teddy.15

 

I’m bouncing on a fluffy pink cloud

 

with a giant Stork

 

there’s a Flamingo too

 

a Woodpecker’s pecking on my head

 

I can see a ship parked up in the distance

 

I hear someone shouting

 

“Ahoy there”

 

rabbit is dancing the tango

 

with the Chicken

 

and the Emu, Cock-a-doodle-doo ling

 

Penguin eating noodles with the chameleon

 

Mrs Crocodile has her hands over her eyes

I can see her giant teeth and her hungry smile

 

all the while

 

me? I’m still bouncing on the fluffy pink cloud

 

a Piglet is teaching a Ferret how to fly

 

and the Camel plays the banjo

 

as a monkey in a tutu floats by…

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 21st, 2024 05:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a dream i had.
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Bella Shepard
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  • Tom Dylan

    A really trippy poem, Teddy. I love it. It reminds me of a 1960s song, Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds, or White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane.

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much Tom. 🌹

    • Accidental Poet

      What did you say your name was? Alice, I think. 🤔

      • Teddy.15

        Ah, I wouldn't mind being a Dahl, thank you dear A.P 🌹

        • Accidental Poet

          Dahl?? 🫤

          • Teddy.15

            Yes a famous children's author

            • Accidental Poet

              Oh, now I see. 😉👍

            • Bella Shepard

              Wow! I'd say "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" move over, you've just been eclipsed. This has such a beautiful bedtime, fairy tale feel to it, I want to curl up and dream. Precious, priceless!

              • Teddy.15

                Wow, such a gorgeous thing today dear Bella, thank you so much. 🌹

              • Thomas W Case

                I could see every line in my head. Tremendous imagery.

                • Teddy.15

                  LOL that's so wonderful to know, thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

                • Doggerel Dave

                  This one slid by me yesterday...I was doing my own bit of Sbaing. Seems you dream in colour Teddy, you lucky lady...Very hallucinogenic.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Dear Dave I had a feeling you would like this, 30+ years working with children I guess I have a a lot of material. Thank you so much. 🌹

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      THIRTY YEARS PLUS? I'm truly lost for words (doesn't happen very often) here...you have the patience of a saint!? not right in this context .... but....

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Keep dreaming Teddy and you may see Orchi and I doing the tango! LOL

                      Andy

                      • Teddy.15

                        I've already seen that. LoL thank you dear Andy 🌹



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