You've never left, although I haven't seen you in so long.
I sense you near, although you're so far away.
A star at night, in dark skies, shines so bright
light giving sight from a past day.
Climbing a starry ladder of rungs the air you breath fills my lungs,
memory's echoes, sweep away shadow's dismays.
Your flame frozen, a sky of diamonds chosen
remembrance's dust of rust lays on broken sun rays.
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: April 7th, 2024 05:04
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Bella Shepard
Comments4
Forever close to you dear sorrenbarret forever close. ❤️ Stunning my friend. ❤️
Thank you so much my friend. I so appreciate your read and comment Teddy.
You paint A bittersweet memory upon this canvas with every stroke, carefully chosen words from your pallete, a true work of art my friend.
Thank you Bella your words are cherished.
Beautiful work. Powerful and vivid.
Thanks Thomas appreciate it.
They will always be with you soren.
Andy
Thank you Andy your words are appreciated
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