She said those words to me,
She said “I love you.”
I replied with those words,
I said “I love you too.”
She replied with these words,
“Prove it, Scream it to the world.”
So I did and whispered these words,
Whispered them in her ear,
“I love you.”
She looked at me and said,
“Why did you whisper it?”
I just looked at her with love
And said these words,
“Because YOU are my world”
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: She is my world and always will be.
- Category: Love
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Great comeback Andy. 😁👍
Thank you AP, much appreciated.
Andy
I'm in a world of my own - with KP. Boohoo! Tears of utter misery. lol.
Thanks Orchi, all will be well in time.
Andy
And that’s lovely dear Andy, true and sincere.
Most kind spiller, thank you.
Andy
Now this is what I'm talking about.Wonderful poem.Well done.
Thank you David, much appreciated.
Andy
An element of poetry often forgotten the twist at the end that makes sense of all that was said before. Well done Andy.
Thank you soren for your very kind words.
Andy
Mr Andy, this almost made me cry Sir, Mary is surely the luckiest lady in the world. ❤️ ❤️
Thank you for your kind words Teddy, I am the luckiest man in the world.
Andy
Wow, you sweet talker you.
Nicely done.
Most kind John, thank you.
Andy
That was so beautiful. Always wished to be someone like that calling it delusions.
Loved the poem.
Thank you Meera, it is no delusion our love for each other is so strong.
Andy
I have only one word for this poem: Sweeeeeeet!!
So kind Bella, thank you.
Andy
Beautiful.
Thank you Thomas.
Andy
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