My World.

Goldfinch60



She said those words to me,

She said “I love you.”

I replied with those words,

I said “I love you too.”

She replied with these words,

“Prove it, Scream it to the world.”

So I did and whispered these words,

Whispered them in her ear,

“I love you.”

She looked at me and said,

“Why did you whisper it?”

I just looked at her with love

And said these words,

“Because YOU are my world”

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 9th, 2024 01:00
  • Comment from author about the poem: She is my world and always will be.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 17
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, Teddy.15
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  • Accidental Poet

    Great comeback Andy. 😁👍

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you AP, much appreciated.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      I'm in a world of my own - with KP. Boohoo! Tears of utter misery. lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi, all will be well in time.

        Andy

      • spilleronsheet

        And that’s lovely dear Andy, true and sincere.

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind spiller, thank you.

          Andy

        • David Wakeling

          Now this is what I'm talking about.Wonderful poem.Well done.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you David, much appreciated.

            Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            An element of poetry often forgotten the twist at the end that makes sense of all that was said before. Well done Andy.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you soren for your very kind words.

              Andy

            • Teddy.15

              Mr Andy, this almost made me cry Sir, Mary is surely the luckiest lady in the world. ❤️ ❤️

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you for your kind words Teddy, I am the luckiest man in the world.

                Andy

              • John Prophet

                Wow, you sweet talker you.
                Nicely done.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Most kind John, thank you.

                  Andy

                • Meera Mere

                  That was so beautiful. Always wished to be someone like that calling it delusions.
                  Loved the poem.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Meera, it is no delusion our love for each other is so strong.

                    Andy

                  • Bella Shepard

                    I have only one word for this poem: Sweeeeeeet!!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So kind Bella, thank you.

                      Andy

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Beautiful.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you Thomas.

                        Andy



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