Never done anything well
everything half ass
Can't put anyone under a spell,
not a diamond just a piece a glass
A pawn, not enough man to be queen
moving down the board, black hole of dreams
White dawn, broken visions unseen
knight takes pawn, buried sunbeams
Worm infested fruit of fame
Stolen goods rust and rot
Cooking over flame of shame
smoke of deception in my pot
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sorenbarrett (
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A.new title utter nonsense lol 😆 oh sorrenbarret your recent work sparks such a light, love this it's really harsh I love everything about it, are we ever truly content with who we are? I'd like to believe I am. People break my balls in ways you cannot imagine each day, living in a foreign country has perks yet a very big difference in culture and work ethic that's so important for me. I've ranted enough (wonderful) 🌹
Thank you so much Teddy I too know what it is like living in a foreign country, spending a lot of my time in Brazil The culture is different, but over the many years, I have grown to accept then love it. Every poem contains a bit of the author but I am always amused when readers feel that every word reflects my present state. I often write from what I observe in others and sometimes the opposite of what I am feeling, just as a devils advocate. Thank you so much for the most kind comments.
You might need a different strain.
Thanks so much for the suggestion. Yes but should I strain it? Maybe it strained my limits. Or is it a different strain of fruit that would not rot so fast.
A fine write SB.
Ah, you've given me the idea for what to give KP for her supper tonight - worm infested fruit. lol.
With all the ideas that I have given you lately she will be really pissed if she finds out they are coming form me. Thanks for the read Orchi
Wow. Powerful work. You pain this picture well with vivid and sharp imagery and language.
Thanks Thomas I appreciate your visit and kind comment.
But we all learn from experience soren as experience cannot be taught.
Andy
Thanks so much Andy. yes so true, hopefully we do learn and not continue to repeat the same mistakes. I appreciate your remarks.
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