so unexpected through the maze
and from the confines of her bed
at last a pathway clears the haze
was it something that i said
that made her stretch to touch my hand
her head leaned forward not a word
i heard her laughter as it broke
through all the smoke that fogs her mind
I never thought once more I’d see
my mother’s eyes smile back at me
Offline)
Comments11
So very beautiful and so relatable as I have friends with dementia, even if this isn't about that your imagery took me there, a stunning read with rhyme too, although incredibly sad we must always find the silver lining and she saw you ❣️ Cassie I'm 49 my mother died when I was 37 I miss her every day. ❤️ A beautiful beautiful reminder of unconditional love
Dear Teddy. So sorry you lost your mum when you were 37, about the same age I lost my Dad. Devastating isn’t it to lose a much loved parent? Following a cancer op, my mum spent her last eight years in a nursing home. The surgery knocked out some brain cells. She just wasn’t the same again. She’s been gone two years now. It was a release for her. Thank you for a beautiful review. Your words touch me 🌹
My mother was very well at work she just lost her heart beat, I didn't get to say goodbye moreover I was at work in Italy. ❤️ Biggest of hugs my dear Cassie. Tha k you for sharing ❤️
Touching beautiful write!
Thank you so much John for your welcome response.
Missed in slow motion. You make me feel lucky, Cassie that while both my parents have left me, they left with their personalities intact.
It is so very difficult to see that mental decline. I didn’t have that with my Dad. It was agony watching my once vibrant mother become someone else. A few days before she died, there was an hour of complete clarity. She came back. That was truly a blessing. We had a perfectly normal conversation. Quite amazing. Thank you Dave for sharing your thoughts.
that must surely have been both an amazing and beautiful moment Cassie .. I am certain that many shall be able to relate to these incredibly moving words you have laid here for us to ponder, fathom and elsewise sadly enjoy .. Neville
Thank you dear Neville. It was a truly amazing moment. After weeks of no eye contact from her or touch, that
spontaneous moment was an absolute gift. I will always remember it.
Such depth of emotions in such simple words...I wish you peace and love
Many thanks Alan for your thoughtful response. Very much appreciated. A special thanks for the peace and love.
Such a touching and vivid picture you paint. Sad yet poignant aging and dementia are a tough part of life for many. So well written.
Thank you sorenbarrett for your appreciation of my poem. It is most welcome.
Beautiful write
Many thanks Introverted Sage for your words of appreciation. Most welcome.
Wonderful words Cassie, your mum and dad will never leave you.
Andy
Thank you so much Andy. You are so right, they are with me each and every day. They filter in and out of my mind and on occasions I hear their voices . Such a comfort. I have lovely memories.
It is beautiful and very relatable. Gratitude is such a great quality. In your poem, you bring them back to life.
Thank you so much for your thoughts Thomas.
So beautiful and so fortunate to have had those last lucid moments. I visit a memory care facility once a week to do a music group, and it's amazing to see those eyes light up when the words of a song come back to them. They're still in there, waiting to be called upon. It is evident how much love went into this poem, thank you for sharing a wonderfully, personal experience. God bless you and mum!
Thank you so much Bella for your response and share. This is quite an old poem. I will always remember this particular moment. I was also fortunate enough to have a completely lucid chat with my mum for a whole hour shortly before she died two years ago. She came back to me . I can’t tell you how satisfying that was. Having a cup of tea and chatting about family and memories. A priceless gift. I also visit my 92 year old aunt in a residential home. Her eyes light up occasionally too. Wonderful to see. I appreciate your time and lovely review. Have a good week.
I can only imagine the peace and comfort of that hour spent, for you both. You have a good week as well!
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.