Do-over

Teddy.15

 
I go into the dark   
 
  and a few moments later 
 
I come back out
 
into the light...
 
as someone new.
  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 16th, 2024 15:59
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 14
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Be careful Teddy - you feel like a right dodgy number there...😊

    • Teddy.15

      lol thank you Dave. 🌹

    • Cassie58

      Do-over. Like a makeover. I love the title Teddy. If you can turn darkness into light at almost the flick of a switch, then you are a miracle worker:) A thought provoking piece of brevity and I very much like your chosen artwork. Putting your best face forward when you feel like crap. That is what came to mind here Teddy. Happy Wednesday to you. 🌹

      • Teddy.15

        Thank you my dear Cassie, actually I was walking home from work thinking about your lovely and latest poem on our Parents and this just popped into my mind, I was going with reincarnation but didn't want to actually say it. Although this has absolutely many meanings for all. Thank you for the inspiration. I've found some lovely art from Google I'm really lucky at finding the great ones. Have a wonderful Wednesday. 🌹

      • Goldfinch60

        Such great words Teddy, we are new people every day we arise from our beds.

        Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you dear Andy. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Brilliant! Another write that is on more than one level. Do we not all come from the dark into the light different people at birth whether literal or in various situations throughout life. Even in thought and problems it is so. Knowledge brings the light and in its resolution change. Love this short but insightful piece.

        • Teddy.15

          Thank you my dear sorrenbarret somewhat inspired by your poem yesterday, I'd like to say for me it's about reincarnation however it is reincarnation of many types which ever the reader can see as we are all individual. You humble my page as usual thank you so very much Sir. 🌹

        • Accidental Poet

          I see reflection here Teddy. Withdrawing into oneself only to emerge re-invented as a better person. Awesome write. 😊👍

          • Teddy.15

            Or simply reincarnation? I've been born again a thousand times and then some dear A.P wonderful to hear everyone's take. Thank you dear friend 🌹

            • Accidental Poet

              Yes, reincarnation works too. 😁

            • Neville



              is that the white cliffs you are referring to by any chance my little chameleon .. 🌹

              • Teddy.15

                Ah, my dear Neville, also change of anything you want, also in London lingo means burglary lol for me this was simply about reincarnation but yes can be of any time and of any change I guess I've had more than one 🌹 thank you

              • Thomas W Case

                Perfect in its brevity.

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

                • 𓆩Mase𓆪

                  Short but powerful poem about transformation. Love It!

                  • Teddy.15

                    Dear Mason Vollman, Thank you so much 🌹



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