A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer

Neville

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer

 

   May you never want or need for more ..

But far less, by far than

   you my love, shall ever weep or bleed ..

 

 

Amen

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2024 01:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    Intriguing words Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville



      ............................ Thanks GF60

    • orchidee

      Yes, intriguing N.
      I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.

      • Neville



        thank you two .. I mean the both of ya

        • orchidee

          I'm half guinea pig, yes? Not half rat. Or else it's 'Invasion of the Mutant Rats'. lol.

          • orchidee

            Ah yes! Dunno what I am now. lol.

            • orchidee

              Is it half past Summer there? Or what season. It's about 20 past Spring here in UK.

            • sorenbarrett

              Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.

              • Neville



                Wowza .. many thanks indeed .. and so much appreciated, I doubt you would believe .. Neville

              • Teddy.15

                Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐

                • Neville



                  Music to my ears Teddy 🌹

                • Doggerel Dave

                  So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
                  A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........

                  • Neville



                    I gave a full pint only yesterday .. but under close clinical supervision .. I do believe my last one went to someone at a hospital where I used to work in Bath .. ta for reaching out and giving us a nudge ..

                    • Neville


                      I stand corrected, it was the day before 🩸🅾️+v

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        Good for you, Neville. I, once upon a time donated following the example of one of my grandfathers. Registered in central London, I still have a reminder card/invitation to further donate at The Crypt, St Martin-in-the-Fields.
                        Many moons later, on one of several return farewell tours I discovered The Crypt was now a community style café restaurant. By then a long-term vegetarian, I was unable to assess the content of the meat dishes…..

                        • Neville



                          good on ya Dave

                        • Bella Shepard

                          An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.

                          • Neville



                            I like fine and dandy .. and yes, maybe .. 💛

                          • Thomas W Case

                            Boom. Excellent work.

                            • Neville



                              Cheers Thomas ..



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