A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer

Neville

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer

 

   May you never want or need for more ..

But far less, by far than

   you my love, shall ever weep or bleed ..

 

 

Amen

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2024 01:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    Intriguing words Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville



      ............................ Thanks GF60

    • orchidee

      Yes, intriguing N.
      I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.

      • Neville



        thank you two .. I mean the both of ya

        • orchidee

          I'm half guinea pig, yes? Not half rat. Or else it's 'Invasion of the Mutant Rats'. lol.

          • Accidental Poet

            Orchi, I thought you were half trout. 😁

            • orchidee

              Ah yes! Dunno what I am now. lol.

              • Accidental Poet

                aah, it's half past 1 right now here on the East Coast of US. 😁

                • orchidee

                  Is it half past Summer there? Or what season. It's about 20 past Spring here in UK.

                  • Accidental Poet

                    Hey, it's the same here too. Imagine that. 😁

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.

                    • Neville



                      Wowza .. many thanks indeed .. and so much appreciated, I doubt you would believe .. Neville

                    • Teddy.15

                      Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐

                      • Neville



                        Music to my ears Teddy 🌹

                      • Doggerel Dave

                        So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
                        A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........

                        • Neville



                          I gave a full pint only yesterday .. but under close clinical supervision .. I do believe my last one went to someone at a hospital where I used to work in Bath .. ta for reaching out and giving us a nudge ..

                          • Neville


                            I stand corrected, it was the day before 🩸🅾️+v

                            • Doggerel Dave

                              Good for you, Neville. I, once upon a time donated following the example of one of my grandfathers. Registered in central London, I still have a reminder card/invitation to further donate at The Crypt, St Martin-in-the-Fields.
                              Many moons later, on one of several return farewell tours I discovered The Crypt was now a community style café restaurant. By then a long-term vegetarian, I was unable to assess the content of the meat dishes…..

                              • Neville



                                good on ya Dave

                              • Bella Shepard

                                An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.

                                • Neville



                                  I like fine and dandy .. and yes, maybe .. 💛

                                • Accidental Poet

                                  All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. 👍

                                  • Neville



                                    No doubt you shall get it in the end .. and hopefully a long time before then 😎👍

                                    • Accidental Poet

                                      That would be nice to receive it before the end. 😁

                                    • Thomas W Case

                                      Boom. Excellent work.

                                      • Neville



                                        Cheers Thomas ..



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