A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer

Neville

A Big Wish Wrapped in A Little Prayer

 

   May you never want or need for more ..

But far less, by far than

   you my love, shall ever weep or bleed ..

 

 

Amen

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2024 01:10
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments8

  • Goldfinch60

    Intriguing words Neville.

    Andy

    • Neville



      ............................ Thanks GF60

    • orchidee

      Yes, intriguing N.
      I added to the first line..... botox! For you know who. lol.

      • Neville



        thank you two .. I mean the both of ya

        • orchidee

          I'm half guinea pig, yes? Not half rat. Or else it's 'Invasion of the Mutant Rats'. lol.

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        • sorenbarrett

          Beautifully stated in so few eloquent words.

          • Neville



            Wowza .. many thanks indeed .. and so much appreciated, I doubt you would believe .. Neville

          • Teddy.15

            Beautiful and elegant dear Nev 🌹💐

            • Neville



              Music to my ears Teddy 🌹

            • Doggerel Dave

              So you have enough, you assert, to avoid the need to ever weep or bleed....
              A generous wish Neville, which has universal applicability.........

              • Neville



                I gave a full pint only yesterday .. but under close clinical supervision .. I do believe my last one went to someone at a hospital where I used to work in Bath .. ta for reaching out and giving us a nudge ..

                • Neville


                  I stand corrected, it was the day before 🩸🅾️+v

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                • Bella Shepard

                  An enigmatic write my friend, open to interpretation? A painful parting that must be? Fine and dandy.

                  • Neville



                    I like fine and dandy .. and yes, maybe .. 💛

                  • Accidental Poet

                    All I want is what is meant for me. Well penned N. 👍

                    • Neville



                      No doubt you shall get it in the end .. and hopefully a long time before then 😎👍

                      • Accidental Poet

                        That would be nice to receive it before the end. 😁

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Boom. Excellent work.

                        • Neville



                          Cheers Thomas ..



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