My darling
if you have ever doubted my love
know that since you've been gone
my heart has too
lost within my very soul
I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you
the only thing I hold in my palms
are tears that bleed
from my grieving eyes
tears of love now lost forever
and as they slip through my fingers
so do you
my darling
if you ever have doubts of my love
know this…
even when the great raven visits me
from the shadows
of the great wrinkles of the moon
I will still await your return
I will wait
and I will wait, until
the great wrinkles in the moon
fade for the very last time
and I too am gone.
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Beautiful sentiment Teddy. Never a love so strong that can not endure. 😊👍
It's just what happens when death rips
a pair of soulmates apart dear A.P thank you 🌹
But does not true love last forever? 🌹
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beautiful.....
and very touching Teddy.
Thank you dear Melvin. 🌹
Touches an empathetic emotion.
Thank you so.muxh for.coming by to.leave your thoughts 🌹
"I sleep alone
yet, I dream of you"
A great line. In this plea for lost love, whether lost by distance or by other forces, there is a commitment that extends beyond time and space.
"and I will wait, until
the great wrinkles in the moon
fade for the very last time
and I too am gone." Romantic and a commitment that few would be willing to issue in this day and age of fickle relationships. Nicely done Teddy.
In this case soulmates ripped apart far too early because one died, two of my best friends inseparable but now are. I totally agree with your reflection on today's love being fickle, dear sorrenbarret it's not easy to find a soulmate either so when you see this type of pain in people you love it does leave a great deal of a lesson. Thank you my dear friend. 🌹
Dear Teddy, beautiful words of undying love. Perfectly penned from a gifted poet. A treat to read. Your posted image, a visual match for the written word. Have a lovely Monday poet. 🌹
It really is undying love, I doubt my friend will ever even want anyone else, I have never seen him cry, or be angry. We are a very big group of friends but he seems to stay strong for us. ❤️ It's been 8 years now but will always feel just like yesterday my heart broke the day she died. 🌹 Thank you so much my dear Cassie. ❤️
I feel your pain. Eight years is a long time to feel that raw. All I can hope is, it starts to soften. My younger sis lost her husband three years ago. Untimely with COVID. I know she will never have another relationship. That pains me, but she is happy with her memories. Have a bouquet of flowers Teddy. 🌸🌹💐
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if there was ever such a thing as a beautiful mourning song .. then this, would most surely be, a [prime contender .. both timeless and classy, Ms. T .. Neville 🌹
Thank you so much Mr N... 🌹
Beautiful emotively loving words Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy. 🌹
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