Safe inside

sorenbarrett

Toothless, bald, wrinkled skin

uncouth, unacceptable, decommissioned

sagging gut, a double chin,

a relic reconditioned

 

Eyes where invisible raindrops fall,

a silent tongue not loud,

patience over coals to crawl,

smile of a rainbow behind a soft cloud

 

Rotting carcass, rusting wreck,

busted supports, pipes leaking,

broken starter, what the heck,

through skin, odor of old mold reeking

 

Inside, tranquil, eye of a storm,

the calm of a summer day,

under a blanket of snow, by the hearth warm,

oblivious of rot and decay

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 23rd, 2024 04:03
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 13
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • orchidee

    Ahh, so you know how KP will look in 40 years time. No make it 4 years, years time! lol. Can't tell with the botox on.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Orchi for the read and comment hope that she looks better than that.

    • Doggerel Dave

      I'd be offended if it wasn't so close to the truth, Soren. Conclusion redeeming.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Dave it is true, I was talking about me. Appreciate the read and comment.

      • Teddy.15

        Fabulous loved your last stanza, palpitations reading this. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you Teddy your remarks are always so welcome.

        • Goldfinch60

          That tranquility can be within us all soren.

          Andy



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