Awakening

Teddy.15

 

 

Opening my imagination

 

will lead me

 

to

 

possibility, possibility

 

I have yet to imagine

 

however

 

I

 

 always try never

 

to wander too far

 

from

 

reality.

 

 

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 24th, 2024 02:07
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Doggerel Dave

    A worthwhile example many should heed, Teddy.
    I will always come down on the side of reality every time.

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you souch dear Dave me too, although sometimes it's harder than others 🌹

    • Cassie58

      Dear Teddy, keeping our feet on the ground is my understanding here. All too easy for dreamers to stay up in the clouds. Beautiful posted image and wise words. Have a lovely day dear poet. 🌹

      • Teddy.15

        Good morning dearest Cassie, Ah, sometimes my imagination runs away so far that I have to reel her in. Thank you so much 🌹

        • Cassie58

          I am guilty too. Us poets are prone to it :)💐

        • sorenbarrett

          Such good advice in poetic form. Both sides need to be considered and attempted but generally the consequences of disregard fall heavier on the reality side. The format of this poem with the first two stanzas taking on the nabla form or inverted triangle. Is this a reference to femininity, differential operator in vector calculus or just my imagination surrounding "possibility, possibility" and not reality. Nicely done my friend.

          • Teddy.15

            How wonderful to know my poem is in the form a lady, no I'm not that clever or do I have the patience to form my poems lol thank you my dear Dr sorrenbarret I'm beaming from ear to ear. 🌹

          • Thomas W Case

            Beautiful. You remind me of Dulcinea.

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you so much dear Thomas. 🌹

            • Goldfinch60

              Good words Teddy and so true but we can use our imagination to take us to such wonderful times.

              Andy

              • Teddy.15

                Indeed, just as well men don't go through menopause lol it makes you think the worse in some cases. 🌹

              • Neville


                sound advice dear T .. the old saying one mans dream is another mans delusion springs to mind .. 🌹

                • Teddy.15

                  Or making your self so frightened in the beginning because your imagination runs riot, but yes my dear Nev, also true. Thank you. 🌹



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