We cut roses
Beauty must die
As petals dry
in a glass grave she reposes
Once living, man made
Gloves its leather
hat with its feather
bleached by time they fade
Only useful without breath
notes of teeth
ivory wreath
more beautiful in life or death?
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: April 27th, 2024 03:31
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Alan R, Bella Shepard
Comments6
Absolutely beautiful personally roses dead or dried I do love. Your metaphor is fabulous and brings death it's splendour. 🌹
Thank you Teddy we love to remember what was so taxidermy was born. But there is nothing like the beauty of the living. I appreciate your kind words friend.
So beautiful. Cut fresh or even in decay there is beauty. This poem sent me traveling to times in the past and people long gone. Such lovely memories you gave me with a vase of roses. No thorns at all.
Thank you so much Cassie your words are deeply appreciated and valued. So glad that you found memories here.
Good write SB.
You know KP well - last verse, first line! lol.
She says I'm the thorn between two roses - to change the picture round!
Thanks Orchi I can guess which option you chose. Appreciate the review
Tricky to tell if she's stuffed or not these days (taxidermy). She won't need that though, being full of botox. lol.
Remnants of a past, that when new and fresh delighted us, and is now a memory of what was. You turn the pages of a diary and find a pressed rose, which speaks of a yesterday oh so dear, and its faint scent is there, if only in your mind. You bring it all together beautifully in poem, soft and gentle.
Thank you Bella a great take on this and most appreciated.
Roses both alive and dead are so beautiful. I have a rose behind my wife's urn of ashes that I took to her funeral over four years ago.
Andy
Thanks Andy for the read and the comment. Yes many do try to hold on to beauty even after death and in our minds it sometimes even grows.
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