inside your soldier hands
my silver heart
of sterling i am valued
more than gold
undo the tiny clasp
find you and me
the wealth lies in the
timeless bond we hold
i am the reason why
you choose to live
there’s nothing else of me
that i can give
our lips meet daily
in the desperate dark
come life or death we’ll
ne’er be torn apart
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Author:
Cassie58 (
Offline) - Published: April 27th, 2024 05:19
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Not keen on romantic poetry, but this is a good 'un, Cassie.
Many thanks Dave. Have a great Sunday
Oh Cassie, so very romantic, I felt the entirety of the emotion. 🌹
Dear Teddy, pleased you enjoyed this read. Many thanks. Have a good Sunday 🌹
Well, your fan club has spoken, this is about as romantic as you can get Cassie. Perfect to "Get In The Mood" 😉🌹
Thank you AP. And a big thank you for the rose too:) Happy Sunday.
Deep meaning here it is not what we are made of that dictates value but memories and feelings. So true Cassie said in such a wonderful metaphor.
Thank you for your encouraging and thoughtful review Sorenbarrett. Have a good Sunday.
Beautiful!
Thank you for reading and commenting Alan. Much appreciated.
Good write Cassie.
Why, yes, you're the reason why I choose to live, of course. Dunno why I didn't think of you earlier! lol.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Thank you Orchi. Can you hear the raucous laughter from my husband 😀
Have a great Sunday.
A locket is such a personl piece of jewlery, it tells a story, as you have so beautifully told here. Lovely verse, loveley sentiment!
Dear Bella thank you for your lovely response. Have a great Sunday 🌹
This one ticks all the write boxes Cassie & then some don't it just .. tis indeed lovely ma'am .. Neville
Thanks Neville so much.
Looks like I ticked my own box. How can I fav my own poem when I don’t know how to fav anyone else’s? 😀 My scrolling on my phone is getting me into trouble. My head really isn’t that big!!!
Beautiful. You paint this scene so well.
Thank you Thomas. Have a good Sunday
Such truly loving words Cassie, Mary and I feel the same way.
Andy
Thank you Andy. May you always feel that way. Have a lovely Sunday
high cassie love this is lovely
and heartfelt to
keep writing xxx jim
Thank you Jim, pleased you enjoyed your visit. Lovely day today.
you are a talented writer brillant poem xxx jim
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