Forsaken
I swear they once moved like
cats
and each was then golden ..
But
only one of them purred ..
Oh’ my
very dearest and precious
of loves ..
Where are you now and why ..
I need you
far more than my chest needs
to rise
and to fall again with each
breath
and the thrust of a new season
without you
..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments8
I moved like a guinea pig. Is that the same?! (first line of your poem). lol.
...................... NO
Breath taking N. 😊👍
your play on words is ever so kind dear poet .. and so I thank you in kind .. kindly 😎👍
This poem truly does draw breath from this reader. So intense is the feeling of need and longing. Both memorable and remarkable poetry Neville. It’s a peach. Have a lovely day .
What a delightful review comment Cassie, thank you so very bloomin muchly .. Neville
Ah stunning and so relatable today dear Nev. Beautiful. 🌹
Bless you my friend .. 🌹
The other pussy is a little mysterious, is she not?
She surely is ..
But I am half human, half guinea pig. Thats's them in my pic. They're not giant hamsters or rats, as some say, or else we need to be afraid, be very afraid, of the mutations. lol.
You are half sharp that's for sure ..................... N
Wonderful words Neville, keep breathing and all will be well.
Andy
Bless you GF60 & big time .. Neville
The one that got away, forever regreted, but ever present, bruised heart that aches with remembrance. This hauntingly beautiful poem is exquisite.
You dear Bella are way too kind .. but thank you for smiling upon these words of mine so favourably .. Neville
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