Exquisitely she weaved her way
Through feelings hidden every day
Tuned in to hear his heartbeats desperate plea
Occasionally when the clouds would form
She danced beneath the thunder storm
Resulting in a rainbow jamboree
She held his soul in every step
Bereft of hope socially inept
A shadow on the wall of deepest black
His low profile had been exposed
The fanciful met the supposed
A kamikaze set to launch attack
She softened every granite cell
Brought heaven's gift into his hell
Rebuilt the crumbling remnants left behind
Alive for the entire day
Her presence quickly washed away
The binds that had been tightening in his mind
It worked so well could only fail
A conjured angry force ten gale
Ripped every nail from four despairing hands
The void she left cannot be filled
Burnt bridges where the milk was spilled
Alone apart in very different lands
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Powerful work.
Thank you very much Thomas
"Brought heavens gift into his hell"--very thoughtful but deliberate wordplay that I love so much!! A great poem to start a great day. You are so talented!
And you are so kind
Thank you Christina
Appreciate it more than you can imagine
Always grateful
Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you very much
A powerful poem. Strong emotion conveyed here and a dynamite ending. What a void was left. A great read peto.
Truly appreciate the visit cassie
And lovely comment
Many thanks
Sent twice in error. My IT skills aren’t great. However I did indeed read you more than once:) Deleted the duplicate 🙂
Thank you
I still double up on the gratitude
I appreciate that 🙂
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