My Very Dearest of Coincidences
can you by any chance explain
to me why,
there is such a newness, to each
of our days ..
and also, why no two, ever feel
or taste the same ..
might it by some chance be love
my love, or indeed,
simply a series of perfect, exquisite
and subtle, coincidences ..
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: May 6th, 2024 01:35
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Comments10
Obviously going well, Neville. The flavour is sweet.
Blimey Dave you were quick off the mark this mane .. shouldn't you be in bed by now .. But cheers n all that jazz .. Neville
Mid afternoon. Straightforward word painting. Enjoyed.
His glory goes on...
Write on .. I take it you do mean Orion
Even he understands.
Yes, I did a similar poem for KP. It began:
'Can you explain dearest, why there is a dullness to each new day, and why I got further downhill every day married to you?!' lol
You get just the one crack of my whip sir, so don't push it ..
Whip? I might swoon! Too Much Info (TMI) to give more details in public. lol.
And - can ya beat a bit of coincidence? I'm waffling now. lol.
I detect some spring in your summer steps Neville. May your days always be summer. Happy bank holiday Monday. What romantic poetry you pen poet.
I am contemplating something that is responsible for said spring Cassie .. thank you for noticing and for those Bank Holiday bests .. and back at you my friend .. Neville
And now the resident romance poet, 🤣 sounds to me someone has put the spring in your step dear Nev. I'm definitely enjoying those muse. 🌹
You have a habit of making me blush mistress T .. but I think the shade goes well with my half empty glass .. & a single red rose, of course ..🌹
Tremendous work and use of the senses. This tastes good.
Thank you Thomas .. Neville
It must be love as life is like this when love is in the air Neville.
Andy
I know .. I also know you feel it every day .. love that is .. Bless you GF60 from the top of your head to the tip of your bill .. Neville
A lovely sentiment, Neville, just perfectly captured.
and likewise, a delightful review .. thank you Tom
A Nice Spring vibe and rhythm
Thank you so very much Reynaldo .. Neville
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