Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..
Don’t you dare die,
at least not
just yet, she pleaded
and begged ..
I need you to suffer
so bad and so
long at my personal
expense
and of course at my
pleasure ..
She shamelessly said ..
But firstly,
I want you to sweat
and to bleed ..
Before I hear you cry
out my name and repent ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments9
Sounds like torture
Sad isn't it
KP sweats and melts her botox on warmer days - she would! lol.
You may be a rodent of some sort but you are also more cuckoo than a Bavarian clock
I'm a gnawing, half human, half guinea pig creature! lol. But I am not a giant mutant hamster, as some say I am in my pic. In which case be very afraid - never seen hamsters that size!
Emotive sad words Neville, nobody deserves to in our world.
Andy
........................... Thanks for dropping in sir .. N
Wot? Not done the washing up again?
G'day sir Dog, it would seem, almost not 👍
I know - no need to be cagey with me, mate. I understand....... marital relations can be complicated... dishwasher out of order......gone to bed early......
Narcasism at a new level dear Nev, there are unfortunately more than a few minds in this world that would have this exact pleasure. My own sister came to mind. 🌹
Blimey Teddy, I am so sorry to hear that, but remember, I know a good hit man should you ever ..🌹
You've already offered more than once! LoL
Wow. You will have that. What's the old saying, with friends like that, you don't need enemies. Great work.
there is also that old saying .. hell hath no fury like a woman scorned .. well some of us learn the hard way .. cheers for dipping in Thomas ..
Cooeee, I'm still here.....yet. I would be! lol.
Oh my goodness. I hope she is seeking help and that you have never had to experience such painful vitriol yourself Neville. That word “repent” just sends the shivers down my spine. Yes, some just like to inflict pain.
Was it Tom Jones who sang 'its not unusual' .. anyway whoever it woz was bang on, because it's not really that unusual .. I think many of us are protected by a kind of sociocultural buffer .. and its often the ones who fall outside the bell shaped curve that behave in extreme ways and get attention invariably from the trail of destruction or hurt they leave behind them .. Now I got that off me chest, I really must thank you Cassie .. Thank you Cassie ... Neville
Profoundly clueless" comes to mind, an aberration in neurology? Makes you wonder how much there is still to be learned about the human brain, and perhaps how little of it we control. Such an appropriate write my friend, for they seem to be coming out of the woodwork these days.
What an absolutely superb formulation Bella .. profound thanks are in order methinks .. Neville 💚
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