Donโ€™t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..

Neville

Don’t You Dare Die, Just Yet ..

 

Don’t you dare die,

at least not

just yet, she pleaded 

and begged ..

I need you to suffer

so bad and so

long at my personal

expense

and of course at my

pleasure ..

She shamelessly said ..

But firstly,

I want you to sweat

and to bleed ..

Before I hear you cry

out my name and repent ..

 

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  • 2781

    Sounds like torture

    • Neville



      Sad isn't it

    • orchidee

      KP sweats and melts her botox on warmer days - she would! lol.

      • Neville



        You may be a rodent of some sort but you are also more cuckoo than a Bavarian clock

        • orchidee

          I'm a gnawing, half human, half guinea pig creature! lol. But I am not a giant mutant hamster, as some say I am in my pic. In which case be very afraid - never seen hamsters that size!

        • Goldfinch60

          Emotive sad words Neville, nobody deserves to in our world.

          Andy

          • Neville



            ........................... Thanks for dropping in sir .. N

          • Doggerel Dave

            Wot? Not done the washing up again?

            • Neville



              G'day sir Dog, it would seem, almost not ๐Ÿ‘

              • Doggerel Dave

                I know - no need to be cagey with me, mate. I understand....... marital relations can be complicated... dishwasher out of order......gone to bed early......

              • Teddy.15

                Narcasism at a new level dear Nev, there are unfortunately more than a few minds in this world that would have this exact pleasure. My own sister came to mind. ๐ŸŒน

                • Neville



                  Blimey Teddy, I am so sorry to hear that, but remember, I know a good hit man should you ever ..๐ŸŒน

                  • Teddy.15

                    You've already offered more than once! LoL

                  • Accidental Poet

                    Sadly N, there are those in our beautiful compassionate world who would rather see every person suffer in pain and emotional sadness. But as I've always said, "What goes around usually comes back around." Keep that quill wet Sir N. ๐Ÿ˜‰

                    • Neville



                      Good on ya AP .. and yes, I am a great believer in karma too, my good man .. N ๐Ÿ™‚

                    • Thomas W Case

                      Wow. You will have that. What's the old saying, with friends like that, you don't need enemies. Great work.

                      • Neville



                        there is also that old saying .. hell hath no fury like a woman scorned .. well some of us learn the hard way .. cheers for dipping in Thomas ..

                      • orchidee

                        Cooeee, I'm still here.....yet. I would be! lol.

                      • Cassie58

                        Oh my goodness. I hope she is seeking help and that you have never had to experience such painful vitriol yourself Neville. That word โ€œrepentโ€ just sends the shivers down my spine. Yes, some just like to inflict pain.

                        • Neville


                          Was it Tom Jones who sang 'its not unusual' .. anyway whoever it woz was bang on, because it's not really that unusual .. I think many of us are protected by a kind of sociocultural buffer .. and its often the ones who fall outside the bell shaped curve that behave in extreme ways and get attention invariably from the trail of destruction or hurt they leave behind them .. Now I got that off me chest, I really must thank you Cassie .. Thank you Cassie ... Neville

                        • Bella Shepard

                          Profoundly clueless" comes to mind, an aberration in neurology? Makes you wonder how much there is still to be learned about the human brain, and perhaps how little of it we control. Such an appropriate write my friend, for they seem to be coming out of the woodwork these days.

                          • Neville



                            What an absolutely superb formulation Bella .. profound thanks are in order methinks .. Neville ๐Ÿ’š



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