It's One a.m. in the psych ward.
Let's just call it 4 North.
On the table that I'm writing at is a plant,
it looks to be a member of the cactus family.
Three nurses sit behind a glass booth
and watch me with curiosity.
One of them looks to be a member of the
cactus family—or is it cacti?
Either way, I don't want her close to me.
Just now, one of the cacti-looking nurses says,
"What are you writing? "
I say, "My escape plan," without looking up.
She says,
"Very interesting."
That's one thing I've noticed in the
psych ward, everything is very interesting.
Just once, I wish they would say,
"That is the most boring load of
shit I've ever heard."
Then, maybe I'd be less inclined
to think they resemble members of the plant life.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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Comments8
Very interesting.
Lol. Thank you.
😂 well let's imagine you and I together in North 4 observing the cacti, lol this is just a genius poem. The satire is top class and by the way I never liked cactus, complicated dry, ugly and prickly.🌹
Yes, you are right. Thank you, dear Teddy.
Wonderful fun words Thomas.
Andy
Thank you.
Are you a cactus? In my delusions I'm The Birdman but me wings always snap off. lol.
Lol. Thanks, my friend.
You nailed it brother .. 😎✔️
Thank you brother.
You really paint the picture, Thomas. Captured it perfectly.
Thank you, Tom. I appreciate the comment.
having met several of these ''cacti'' people, it all makes perfect sense to me. not that I had an escape plan, I was only visiting ;o)
Lol. Thank you, my friend.
OK, I ended up here in the end… referred from Teddy’s comment on her funny madness poem.
Don’t visit very much as I’m a little resistant to your rubber stamp quality comments on other’s poems and the constant advertising of your own published work.
However I did enjoy the ‘very interesting’ closure.
Good luck.
Very interesting.
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