Frankenstein's temple

sorenbarrett

Nature's effortless law

Breath reflexively,

no exertion

Hearts beat unconsciously

Flowers bloom without thought

Culture's iron gate's rusted

Chain's links of laws,

locked with moral padlocks

Society a sepulcher,

religion's painted urn,

no matter how pretty the tomb

the occupant's dead

Frankenstein's patched zombe parts,

technology's creation,

beauty embalmed,

with plastic flowers,

on cold polished marble stone

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  • 2781

    I wonder if the locks been picked?

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks for the read and comment. Interesting question. Many have tried to pick moral's locks but few have succeeded without consequences.

      • 2781

        True.

      • orchidee

        Ahh, rather like KP's Temple! lol.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Orchi appreciate the read. Didn't know KP had a temple.

        • Teddy.15

          The outside is not all it seems, stunning in poetic verse as ever. 🌹

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Teddy for the read and kind words

          • Thomas W Case

            Tremendous work. Poignant and alive.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks for the read Thomas

            • Doggerel Dave

              The great pivot in your piece - culture certainly has much to answer for. Only solution: interrogate at all times.
              A well painted picture, Soren.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thanks Dave you got right to the point on this one and I thank you for your read and understanding interpretation.

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Hey Soren - good to feel a little understood sometimes Isn't it.....

                  PS: You put something on my Nostradamus piece ... disappeared... was it my trigger finger or wot?

                • Goldfinch60

                  Super words soren, I wonder if we can get into that temple. LOL

                  Andy

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks Andy for the read and comment. Yes I think we are already on the inside looking out.



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