A Poem Written By Henry age 11
This is the most beautiful thing in the world is the love
is having a fight with hate
the hate is hurting him with a sword
but the love is winning
because the love is protecting us
from cruel and painful things
the people can learn to hate
but if someone can learn to hate
they can also learn to love.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I am using my poetic licence on this very special occasion (mother's day Italia) to post this gorgeous poem written by my beautiful Son who is 11, and who's 1st language is italian so writing a poem in English is an enormous triumph, i'm so very proud.
- Category: Love
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Comments8
Beautiful! There can not be one without the other Love and Hate are identical twins the Janus face. The strongest forms of emotion. One that can't hate you can't love you. A wonderful write Teddy
So very kind dear sorrenbarret, the wonderful thing for me, is that he wrote it entirely, I edited two words because even though he wrote it in English he was thinking in italian, and it just wouldn't habe worked , i was truly amazed when he read it to me, so very proud of him, he has a heart of gold. Thank you so much dear friend. 🌹
a beautiful poem
and a very proud mother.
god bless you both.
I always speak with him in English but I'm the only one apart from my side of family which are all in London so I was truly amazed that he could even write it in English, we always want him to work hard at school in Italian, as it's his first language so truly I was gobsmaklcked when he read this. A very special moment for us. I'm so glad I've shared this today. His words so true as well. Thank you my dearest Melvin. 🌹 God bless you Sir. ❤️
Great poet's start so young these days, don't they proud Mom. 🌹
Indeed dear A.P I never knew he could, such an amazing child, if I do say so myself. Thank you so much dear friend. 🌹
He's following in the footsteps of a very talented Mother. I foresee a very bright future in that young man, and quite possibly a love as strong as Romeo and Juliet. 💏
Thank you dear A.P my true hope is that he is happy with anything he chooses in life, such a beautiful thing to say dear friend thank you. ❤️
Love is the answer to every question. Truly beautiful work your son did. Lovely.
Thank you dear Thomas, he wrote it on his P.C he doesn't have a phone, not like most his age, we chose a personal computer so he can really use it for greater good, and he did. I was overwhelmed with pride as English being his second language thank you so much dear friend. 🌹
the kids a bloomin genius .. not only is he a bi-lingual poet but he's a bloomin philosopher too ..
and of course you are proud .. who wouldn't be .. I reckon he'll go far 🌹
Wow Nev, so kind he is a very wise lad, he has a beautiful heart and he is so very proud today to be part of this wonderful platform. Thank you so much for your very very kind support. 🌹
Tell him there's this old English fella who is mightily impressed with his poem and the sentiment it contained .. I hope he continues to write .. some of the best historical poets were Italian .. 🌹
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Your son is very lucky to have the guidance and love of a mother like you. Happy Mothers day. My favorite poem is this today 100%.
Dear RSM0812, Thank you so much, such kindness to come here and say such a beautiful thing, he is over the moon and I'm truly grateful for all of the kindness. 🌹
He will go far Teddy, you must be very proud of him. Please give him my best wishes.
Andy
Thank you so much dear Andy, he has been truly overwhelmed with happiness over this lovely poetry experience 🌹
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Dear Teddy, I can feel your pride in your son. You have a budding poet in your hands already. Love must always triumph over hate. Well done both of you. 🌹
Hello dearest Cassie, Henry has said to thank you all so much, he truly is proud, and for him it's an experience that he will never forget. You have all been incredibly kind and patient to even read it in the first place, so we send our hugs and love back to all of you. 🌹 Thank you dearest Cassie. 🌹 Ps, I think he will take after his Dad and be a researcher, he is also very good at that.
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