Golden Girl.

Goldfinch60



The Golden Girl walks as though gliding on ice,

In a world of her own , where no  others intrude

On the thoughts of her loves, that have long flown past.

She smiles serenely, at a moment remembered,

In a time, almost forgotten.

 

Others just watch the gentle sway of her hips

As she smoothly goes past them, ignoring their stares.

She’s deep in her thoughts, for those whom she cares,

Only seen by the light formed by her blue shining eyes,

Of a time, just recalled.

 

The swing of her long blonde hair moves in time

With the gentle glide of her steps, that transport her,

Away from your view, into her past, that only she

Can unlock, with a key to a box recently  found,

To a time, thought lost.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 14th, 2024 01:02
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 19
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments8

  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.
    Now my poem on KP - The Botox Girl. lol.

  • Teddy.15

    Simply wonderful dear Andy, I could literally see her. 🌹

    • Goldfinch60

      So kind Teddy, thank you.

      Andy

    • Tom C Dylan

      Nicely done. You really paint the picture.

      • Goldfinch60

        Very much appreciated Tom.

        Andy

      • Neville



        absolutely delightful reflections and now poemed to perfection for always ..

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Neville for your very kind words.

          Andy

        • sorenbarrett

          A most beautiful image Here it seems that the key is the last stanza. I think that many of us have been in her spot. Very nice Andy.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you soren, Yes we too may have found those keys to boxes of better times.

            Andy

          • Accidental Poet

            Reflection on a moment in the past is a gift to oneself. Well written Andy. 😉👍

            • Goldfinch60

              So true AP, those moments are so rare to us.

              Andy

            • Thomas W Case

              Tremendous use of imagery and the senses to paint this scene.

              • Goldfinch60

                Much appreciated Thomas, thank you.

                Andy

              • David Wakeling

                Very beautiful description.Well done.It took me to a place of peace.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Most kind David, thank you.

                  Andy



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