Breath of peace
through sweet napalm smoke
Humanity painted in infant blood
Conspired, contrived, propaganda
spelled "official truth"
Liberty on a leash
Tongues tied in a knot of political correctness
Brutalities worship
a bloody alpha god
Different cattle, one herd
branded, slaughterhouse bound
Face book anomie
Orders on broken stone
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: May 14th, 2024 04:31
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 24
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, Qurrathul Ain, Doggerel Dave
Comments5
So very poetic and so true, why can't we all just live in peace? I dislike religion for this reason. A Masterpiece dear sorrenbarret. Your posh choice of writing form is lovely. 🌹
Thank you Teddy your kind remarks are again appreciated. Yes peace seems a long way off for people, it does not seem in our nature. Although there are many good and kind people it doesn't take much to set us off.
Breath of peace to you, KP says to me - breath of botox! lol.
Thanks Orchi Botox nothing more than some bacteria that causes you to swell. I suggest silicon implants lasts longer.
She will fall over, top heavy, if she has more silicon implants. lol.
Each of your lines, Soren in this densely packed poem translates to a red rotting splash in my brain. The resultant picture is, and because of its inner truth, very hard to remove……and why should I…..?
Thanks Dave lines I wish I couldn't write. I thank you for the read and comment.
Strong true words soren,
Andy
"WAR IS CREATED BY PEOPLE TOO OLD TO FIGHT FOR THOSE TOO YOUNG TO DIE!"
Thanks Gold a great line and true. Thanks for the read and comment.
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