I fished you in
I threw you back
I fished you in
I threw you back
this went on for years
until the day
I threw you in
and this time you swam away...
I do hope you live happily ever after
I really do.
- Author: Teddy.15 ( Offline)
- Published: May 15th, 2024 05:16
- Comment from author about the poem: Positive thoughts! ❤️
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 30
- Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
Comments5
So nice the fish kept coming back to visit with you Teddy. 😉👍
Depends how one see's it my dear A.P thank you my dear friend. 🌹 🐟
Not what we mean by fishing here. It's a different metaphor. Good one, though.
Indeed, thank you this was my first love. I actually find fishing therapeutic though. Thank you so much. 🌹
very nicely sentimentized my friend 👍🌹
Thank you dear Nev. 🌹
I love the play on words and like throwing in the towel it is over when it's over. This seems to be the case with fish and people as well. It reads so playful and reminds me of all the times I went fishing and all the fish I threw back and a couple of times I have caught the same fish twice. In relationships I have caught the same person more than once as well. So nicely done.
Wonderful dear sorrenbarret you got it perfectly as usual. 🌹 Thank you.
I am sure that fish is living happily after knowing you dear Teddy.
Andy
🤣 I truly hope so dearest Andy, thank you. 🌹
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