Hope's sun raises
night shades shrink
Sun at peak
Warmth of love
fire of hell
Age's sun falls
shadows lengthen
darkness calls
black of night
star light expel
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: May 15th, 2024 14:38
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 17
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
Comments3
Dear sorrenbarret an abundance of imagery, beautifully crafted. Can certainly have many meanings. 🌹
Thanks Teddy yes I like to write things that can be taken many ways by different people. Even when I write something that I think is clear people take it differently and that's great.
Wonderful words soren.
Andy
Thanks Gold the read is appreciated.
Good write SB.
Now my (un) original poem entitled: Erm, Dark and Light. lol.
Originality was never one of my strong suites unless weirdness can be counted as original. Thanks for the read and humor I can always use it..
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