Lovelorn Acrostic.

Goldfinch60



Lost in dreams, a heart does mourn, 
Over memories, feelings torn. 
Voices echo from the past, 
Endless whispers that forever last.

Lonely nights, the soul does yearn, 
Old wounds ache, and fires burn. 
Remembered smiles, tears forlorn, 
Never-ending lovelorn.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 17th, 2024 00:57
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Where did that come from, Andy? Not all over with Mary Is it?

    • 2781

      Nice one.

      • Goldfinch60

        Just some thing that came to mind about losing Joyce to dementia.
        No Mary and I are wonderful and always will be, thank you for your concern Dave, much appreciated.
        The Laphroaig is on me. LOL.

        Andy

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you 2781.

          • Doggerel Dave

            That's a relief.
            I think I'm going to bust open my ancient piggy bank and buy a bottle of my own Andy...might contain some Olde English coinage in shillings and threepenny pieces - OK if I send them to you by registered mail....?

            • Goldfinch60

              No problem Dave, I still have some of my own, if you have the 1933 penny I will have that from you if you like.

              Andy

              • 2781

                I'd keep the silver and exchange the copper for the same, or better.

                • Doggerel Dave

                  2781 -If you can manage it, please keep yourself out of other people's threads; it's too confusing.

                  • 2781

                    Sorry, I couldn't help myself. I thought you were injecting some humour or irony. Didn't mean to offended.
                    I love Andy and the life he speaks so eloquently of x.

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      No, on this occasion just a very straight question with perhaps the merest smidgin of doubt.

                      You didn't offend - just makes it slightly confusing, with more entries in the notifications link to clear, that's all.

                      Ditto Andy.

                      • 2781

                        Cheers.

                      • orchidee

                        A fine poem Gold.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Beautifully done dear Andy, such emotion and beauty in your lines. 🌹

                        • Goldfinch60

                          So kind Teddy, thank you Dear Teddy.

                          Andy

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Beautiful words of loss and missing someone. Short but so nicely written.

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Thank you soren, much appreciated.

                            Andy

                          • Neville


                            I know where this is coming from .. straight from the heart .. 💜

                            • Goldfinch60

                              So very true Neville, thank you.

                              Andy

                            • David Wakeling

                              Deep feelings here.Well constructed.Enjoyed.

                              • Goldfinch60

                                Most kind David, thank you.

                                Andy

                              • Thad Wilk

                                A wonderfully penned
                                Acrostic indeed!
                                Awesome presentation
                                and my pleasure to read! 👍
                                Best regards, ☕ peace✌️
                                Thad

                                • Goldfinch60

                                  Thank you Thad, kind regards to you as well, may all be good in your life.

                                  Andy



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