And who has swept the stars away
not one remains in sight?
Too eager with their bristle brush
they’ve cleansed the sky at night.
So all those clustered gems I love
which give me peace of mind,
are huddled in an unknown place
that torchlight can not find.
A canvas stretches end to end
devoid of silver light,
the moon has left those sparklers gone
will no one hear my plight?
If I should ask or make a wish
or plead for compromise,
will someone spare two tiny stars
and place them in my eyes?
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Truly beautiful, such emotion dear Cassie, I couldn't imagine your eyes not sparkling though. Your imagery is stunning. Have a wonderful weekend 🌹
Thank you Teddy. One of my older writes out for an airing. Pleased you like it. Have a very happy weekend dear poet. 🌹
the words splendid & divine spring to mind, but even they don't do your latest justice .. and do you know why? because there aint any, justice that is .. with much respect .. Me 🙂
Thank you Neville for such a warm review. Maybe I should post my latest instead of back tracking? I think I might. Good idea 🙂
Is it mere than light pollution,
I often wonder.
Who knows, but I like what I see. Thank you for stopping by. Happy Sunday.
Wonderful emotive words Cassie.
May those stars shine again soon.
Andy
Many thanks Andy for stopping by. Have a lovely Sunday.
Beautiful work. Powerful and touching.
Thank you Thomas. Sorry for belated response. I appreciate you.
hi Cassie this is a really lovely poem
touching to you really are a talented writer xx
Good morning Jim. Thank you for a lovely response. Have s good Monday.
is some of your poems based on fact and memories
there lovely
Clapping!!
A wonderfully, touching
and emotional write!!
Deserves a
standing ovation!, BRAVO!! 👏👏
Great read poetess
a treat to recite!
Best wishes 🐦 🤗. 🌹. Thad
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