Any moment now the 5th and last will land

Poetic Dan

To my children may you always know this, you are never a burden and I wanted you to exist.

Life may not seem like rainbows all of the time, like a long line of duck ups in a never-ending rhyme

Mistakes are to be taken, the best path is never easy, enjoy every emotion as they all come like breezy

The fun is met to be in the journey, only fools care about the destination. Every moment there's new waves you can choose to go on.

Proud as punch to be your dad, each lesson from you all to be a better man. Blagging every moment except for the love I have in my hand, never to be disappointed with road I chose to have.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 18th, 2024 05:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: Been a while and I can say I'm so glad to see familiar souls and others in yet to get to know... yes if you get the picture! I have a new baby due any moment and a few poems in my chest too share and plenty to create! Much peace and respect. Keep up the write
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  • Teddy.15

    Beautiful dear Dan, nothing should ever make us prouder than our own children. 🌹 And congratulations dear Dan to all of you ❤️

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you and nothing does! I born for this life

    • orchidee

      Good write Dan.

      • Poetic Dan

        Always appreciated my friend
        Much peace and respect

      • sorenbarrett

        A great message to your children and I can hear the pride and optimism in your words. May you have many more days to write.

        • Poetic Dan

          Oh they truly are the best part of me! The legacy I leave and my muse why I'm here nothing makes me prouder to live the life I live!

          Thank you for your time my friend

        • jarcher54

          As little Davey Copperfield says, More please!

          • Poetic Dan

            Poetry plenty but creating life I am done.
            Always appreciate your time

          • Goldfinch60

            Your children will forever love you Dan.
            Good to see you back.

            Andy

            • Poetic Dan

              It's the work we but in love recipe that can't be undone!

            • Neville


              Hey Dan .. Many, many, many huge CONGATULATIONS my man .. So good to have you back where you writefully belong .. Write on brother ..

              • Poetic Dan

                Ha ha! Your words truly put a smile on my face my friend and thank you! It actually feels way better than I thought it would maybe because delightful souls like you are still here too! Always a pleasure and hope things are looking up for you too!
                Write where I belong letting go of all the poetry in my bones

                Thanks for making this feel a bit like home! I've actually been on this site longer than I've know my wife.. lol

                • Neville



                  ................................................ 😎👍

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Good to know your are still around and seemingly quite productive, Dan....😊

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Yeah a bit to productive but a happy surprise nonetheless and always doing my thing my friend!
                    Also feels good to have your vibration still helping us all feel heard.
                    Always appreciate your time my friend



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