Into the wilds we went,
My lover took me,
Took me to Wales
To the place she once lived.
She drove over the wilds.
The beautiful countryside
Stretching for miles.
Hills and mountains all over,
Sheep and cattle in the green
Enjoying their life.
My lover took me to places,
Places I had never been
And the enjoyment of the views
Just blew my mind.
Such a joy being as one,
As one with Nature’s glory,
Nature’s glory and wonder.
- Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: May 19th, 2024 01:13
- Comment from author about the poem: A wonderful trip with Nature.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
Nothing better to remind us of magic around where there's so much variety of life to found. My daughter loves woodlouse at moment lol
So very true Dan, thank you.
Hope your daughter enjoys her woodlice. LOL
Andy
I love Whales too .. seen Moby Dick at least a dozen times ..
Yes I have read the book several times as well.......
Andy
A fine write Gold. Was I there in that choir, or over the hills and far away?! lol.
We'll keep a welcome in the hillside..... but not for me singing. heehee.
There will always be a welcome for you Orchi.
Except if I start singing?! lol.
A beautiful memory you have both made. 🌹
So true Teddy, thank you.
Andy
You strike at my weak spot Andy. I spend most of my time in the wilds where the closest house is half a mile through forest and green hills. Speaking to the poem itself it is a comforting feel with love leading. Noting that love once lived in the wilds is so primal it strikes at the roots of nature itself. The meter and near rhymes carried me on as if I were the poem. My favorite lines:
"My lover took me to places,
Places I had never been"
Merging nature with love that always takes us to places we have never been. Most Beautiful
So very kind soren, yes moving love and Nature is always so wonderful.
Andy
“A wonderful trip with Nature.”? This time I have little doubt …. Mary HAS been abandoned and the new lady Nature has taken control……………………….
Still calling in debts to be able to afford a bottle of Laphroaig since you are proving so tardy….!!!
Sweet smooth poem and picture you sketched, BTW.
Thank you for your kind words Dave, much appreciated.
The Laphroaig is here wating for you in my drinks cabinet for when you next pass by.
Andy
Tremendous work. You make Wales come alive.
Much appreciated Thomas.
Andy
Its a beautiful country Wales but a little cold at times. Nice to go with a friend.Great read
It certainly was great to go with my partner David, thank you.
Andy
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