Perfect Integration

Cassie58

in awe of starlings 

flocking in murmuration 

fluid in blue sky 

  • Author: Cassie58 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 19th, 2024 05:11
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 36
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Teddy.15

    Wow, and the shapes they make like magic in that blue sky, I could watch them all day. Such a magnificent piece of poetry. 🌹

    • Cassie58

      Thank you Teddy. We can learn so much from our avian friends. Don’t you just love murmurations? Hope you have had a lovely Sunday.

      • Cassie58

        Thank you Orchi, for stopping by. Hope your Sunday has been fine.

      • orchidee

        A fine write Cassie.

      • Thomas W Case

        Tremendous brevity. You make it come alive.

        • Cassie58

          Thank you so much Thomas. I appreciate you.

        • Alan R

          You're fluent in sky language!

          • Cassie58

            Thank you so much Alan. I appreciate you stopping by.

          • Goldfinch60

            Beautiful to see the murmurations in the sky Cassie.

            Andy

            • Cassie58

              You are right Andy. They are mesmerizing to watch. A source of much fascination. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.

            • Neville



              this is stupendous .. one of my favourite sky things captured perfectly

              • Cassie58

                Thank you Neville.

              • sorenbarrett

                A beautiful Haiku. My favorite Haikus are about nature and this is one.

              • Thad Wilk

                An awesome haiku thank you!
                Lovely imagery I must say! 🕊️ ☁️
                Eloquently penned poetess,
                a treat to read today! ☺️
                Best wishes 🌹 🐦 🤗 Thad

                • Cassie58

                  Thank you kindly Thad. Pleased you appreciate my efforts. Have a great day.

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Neva tried a Haiku before....So....

                  Although I don’t know
                  The starlings of which you speak
                  Thanks for the window.

                  I believe rhyming's banned - couldn't help myself...🙃

                  Crits welcome _ Thanks also for popping in, Cassie.

                  • Cassie58

                    Well done you Dave. I like what you have done. Good to try new things. I particularly like

                    thanks for the window

                    You got the syllable count right too.

                    Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate you. A murmuration of starlings is incredible to watch. Try googling. They are awesome.

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      And I did just that. Amazing. Thanks for pushing me in that direction.
                      Incredible. We in the southern hemisphere might have the stars, but as consolation you have the starlings.



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