Blind

sorenbarrett

Rocks talk, rings echo in a pond,

obscuring ripples in the mind,

drips of silence fall beyond,

illumination's eye made blind

 

Eyes seeing through dark

Quiet thunder rolls

igniting lightning's spark

with hell's burnt out coals

 

Sunlight ashes exhausted glows

Drifting shadows pile high

dust through an hourglass flows

Shard cut broken sky

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2024 05:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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Comments5

  • 2781

    ;and what will I, if it already be kindled?

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you so much for the review and most interesting comment. To answer, enjoy the warmth.

      • 2781

        Cooling down here but I am cozy.

      • Teddy.15

        Stunning dear sorrenbarret simply stunning. 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          You are too kind Teddy. I appreciate the review and most gracious comment

        • orchidee

          Good write SB.

        • Thomas W Case

          Superb work. Powerful imagery.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Thomas I appreciate it.

          • Goldfinch60

            Within our mo
            ind we can see and feel so many things soren but many do not realise this.

            Andy

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks Gold for the read and wise words they are appreciated.



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