And That Has Never Changed

Teddy.15

 

That night was one

I could never forget 

the dance floor, full of strangers

even so

 

the only one I could see...

was you.

 

 

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2024 13:00
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 52
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments7

  • theblackdahlia

    That’s adorable

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much. 🌹

    • Doggerel Dave

      And you found me on the underside of that glittering orb. What vision Teddy.... Must've been the mirrors....

      Is it my imagination or are people leaving/taking a holiday? Never mind, now you've seen me...... I won't go anywhere. 😊

      • Teddy.15

        Must be your imagination dear Dave, although I do like my pages to be positive. Thank you. 🌹

        • Doggerel Dave

          Wasn't being negative, I wouldn't dare. Stunned by that mirror ball.....

          • 4 more comments

        • Thomas W Case

          Ahhhh. Beautiful.

          • Teddy.15

            Ahhhh thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

          • Goldfinch60

            Beautiful.

            Andy

            • Teddy.15

              Awe thank you dearest Andy. 🌹

            • Accidental Poet

              So romantic Teddy, I remember days like this. 🌹

              • Teddy.15

                Soulmates, my dearest A.P great to see you, and thank you, yours was that moment you first glanced Sharon. Yes my heart on my sleeve for this one. Thank you my dear friend. 🌹 ❤️

                • Accidental Poet

                  Every moment seeing Sharon had me in awe Teddy. She just blew everything else away when she smiled. 🌹😊

                • Cassie58

                  Good morning dear Teddy. A moment in time, never forgotten. Wonderful romantic brevity. Have a beautiful Friday.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Thank you dear Cassie have a beautiful Friday to you too. 🌹

                  • sorenbarrett

                    An image that conveys such a feeling so well. Short and to the point. In this case it is true, less is more.

                    • Teddy.15

                      Thank you dear sorrenbarret, I agree and feel humbled that this one works, you may be aware I've always loved the small poems, and I am forever trying to get one down to one line. Someday I will. Thank you dear friend. 🌹



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