And That Has Never Changed

Teddy.15

 

That night was one

I could never forget 

the dance floor, full of strangers

even so

 

the only one I could see...

was you.

 

 

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2024 13:00
  • Category: Love
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  • theblackdahlia

    That’s adorable

    • Teddy.15

      Thank you so much. 🌹

    • Doggerel Dave

      And you found me on the underside of that glittering orb. What vision Teddy.... Must've been the mirrors....

      Is it my imagination or are people leaving/taking a holiday? Never mind, now you've seen me...... I won't go anywhere. 😊

      • Teddy.15

        Must be your imagination dear Dave, although I do like my pages to be positive. Thank you. 🌹

        • Doggerel Dave

          Wasn't being negative, I wouldn't dare. Stunned by that mirror ball.....

          • Teddy.15

            No not you dear Dave, I wasn't refering to you being negative, I was refering to your question about others, my friends are few here some have gone for now, some I have no idea where they are , those people are always missed by me, the ones that come to my page to leave negativity will never be wanted on my pages. I hope now you understand. My art yes, I don't know if it's a Google thing of Italy but I always manage to get wonderful art. It may be that I am a good researcher and use the key words. Thank you dear Dave. 🌹

            • Doggerel Dave

              Definitely a persistent researcher Teddy - great results.

              • Teddy.15

                Next time you are looking for something (imagery) in particular let me know I'll try and paste it to you to see if it works. 🌹

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Thanks Teddy.

                • Thomas W Case

                  Ahhhh. Beautiful.

                  • Teddy.15

                    Ahhhh thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Beautiful.

                    Andy

                    • Teddy.15

                      Awe thank you dearest Andy. 🌹

                    • Cassie58

                      Good morning dear Teddy. A moment in time, never forgotten. Wonderful romantic brevity. Have a beautiful Friday.

                      • Teddy.15

                        Thank you dear Cassie have a beautiful Friday to you too. 🌹

                      • sorenbarrett

                        An image that conveys such a feeling so well. Short and to the point. In this case it is true, less is more.

                        • Teddy.15

                          Thank you dear sorrenbarret, I agree and feel humbled that this one works, you may be aware I've always loved the small poems, and I am forever trying to get one down to one line. Someday I will. Thank you dear friend. 🌹



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