And just like that
once again, she was here
her glow, warmer than it's ever been
my cold trembling hands
now still, almost as if
they were paying attention
to what was in my room
and the light, so bright
as if this time, she had brought down from the sky
a thousand stars to comfort me
my eyes closed of course
but I knew, I just knew
because
she told me, the last time she came
she promised, next time
she would bring something
incredibly special with her
and she did
and of course, as I always do
once she leaves
I reflect on the moment
and on the miracle
that has graced my side once again
and all I can imagine
is…
this wonderful universe really is, full of life.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another chapter from My Angel.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
Love your miracles Teddy. 🌹
A thousand stars and all, thank you my dearest A.P 🌹 imagine the universe full of life what an extraordinary image that would really be. ❤️
A masterpiece for sure. 😉🌹
Just so comforting. Like a warm blanket on a cold day Teddy. You brought my mum to me this morning and I can’t thank you enough for that. I love your Angel poem and your beautiful posted art work. Have a happy Sunday dear poet.
Thank you dear Cassie, I am truly humbled by your lovely words, and that you feel I brought your mum to you. 🌹 Happy Sunday my dear friend.
Such glory is brough to you from your angel and to us with your words Teddy.
Andy
Thank you dear Andy, she is indeed quite special. 🌹 Happy Sunday dear friend.
A most beautiful painting in vibrant colored words. I love the implication that the great thing brought and the miracle is contained in the last line
" this wonderful universe really is, full of life." and in fact I believe you have hit on it. Of all the universe's miracles that is the greatest and as in all miracles something we still do jot understand. A most beautiful write Teddy.
Dear sorrenbarret, without imagination and possibility we would be closed in a dark room so to speak, thank you for your beautiful and enthusiastic review, always very much appreciated my dear friend. 🌹
So warm and beautiful. You are wonderful.
Thank you dear Thomas. 🌹
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