First Vision All In White

aDarkerMind

first vision all in white

particles of parables through the idle hands of brill

earl grey for more an unassuming mind

to wade through mornings' redwood

through a cloud of insulin

as one with he with his spotted leaves of grale

 

above the knees of barnacles 

in full view of an ordinary chase

mother moon in her horses shoes

through a funnel of a face

she has laid aside her grieving ghost

in a stomach full of ice

 

at twice the speed of holly leaves

besotted by the burning

of the april-fools unearthed

neither kind nor threat shall bear her child of fume

surrendering her nest on a pale estate

bathes her sage in the circles of a crop

 

first vision all in white

chanting trees with their foot-and-mouth ajar

grandfather cloaked and daggered 

buried with the chimes in a foghorns molten glow;

how still the mothers wings weep innocence;

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Melvin James (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 26th, 2024 07:31
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 15
  • User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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Comments3

  • 2781

    Who has heard such a thing?
    Who has seen such things? Shall the earth be made to bring forth in one day? Or shall a nation be born at once?

  • Teddy.15

    Dearest Melvin, outstanding imagery and written with such class,

    mother moon in her horses shoes

    through a funnel of a face

    she has laid aside her grieving ghost

    in a stomach full of ice

    This has struck me, wow and as the night then turns to day from one yet to become... I am truly inspired by your gracious pen. 🌹

    • aDarkerMind

      many thanks Teddy.

      as kind as always and greatly appreciated my friend;

    • Thomas W Case

      Tremendous use of language. Brilliant work.



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