Impressions of A Senryu

Neville

Impressions of A Senryu

 

either I am now

invisible, or indeed,

   they have all gone blind ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 27th, 2024 02:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: and still there are those who say size doesn't matter
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 45
  • User favorite of this poem: MendedFences27.
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    I been invisible nearly, mucking about with blips on here today. KP's jinxed it, I bet! lol.

    • Neville


      I haven’t noticed anything wrong but thanks for the tip off ☹️

      • orchidee

        Yes, look out for any pesky error messages!

      • MendedFences27

        Where were you? In a land of giants?
        This caused be to wonder about being unnoticeable. Is it a good or bad thing.
        I know these are hard to pen and have them make sense and offer a clear thought, loved this one -Phil A

        • Neville


          Ha, bless you Phil. I have thinking about you recently thanks a million my friend. Hope you are well and that your world is being kind. .. Neville 😎👍

        • Thomas W Case

          I see you and read you. Keep on going, brother.

          • Neville


            Cheers mate, that's what the old fella likes to hear .. N

          • Cassie58

            Your light continues to shine. You are far from invisible. Good morning. Happy Tuesday Neville.

            • Neville



              Thanks so much Cassie .. & have a happy Tuesday yourself ma'am .. Neville

            • Goldfinch60

              Some just see nothing
              Or don't believe in our lives
              But those who care do.

              Andy

              • Neville


                for a moment, I was seeing dubble .. like a flock of goldfinches .. I expect the recent glitches were to blame .. thanks Andy I know exactly what you mean sir .. Neville



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