Impressions of A Senryu
either I am now
invisible, or indeed,
they have all gone blind ..
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Neville (
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I been invisible nearly, mucking about with blips on here today. KP's jinxed it, I bet! lol.
I haven’t noticed anything wrong but thanks for the tip off ☹️
Yes, look out for any pesky error messages!
Where were you? In a land of giants?
This caused be to wonder about being unnoticeable. Is it a good or bad thing.
I know these are hard to pen and have them make sense and offer a clear thought, loved this one -Phil A
Ha, bless you Phil. I have thinking about you recently thanks a million my friend. Hope you are well and that your world is being kind. .. Neville 😎👍
I see you and read you. Keep on going, brother.
Cheers mate, that's what the old fella likes to hear .. N
Your light continues to shine. You are far from invisible. Good morning. Happy Tuesday Neville.
Thanks so much Cassie .. & have a happy Tuesday yourself ma'am .. Neville
Some just see nothing
Or don't believe in our lives
But those who care do.
Andy
for a moment, I was seeing dubble .. like a flock of goldfinches .. I expect the recent glitches were to blame .. thanks Andy I know exactly what you mean sir .. Neville
A wonderful
Senryu,
thought
provoking and
pretty witty too!! 👍
Great read indeed
much enjoyed
thank you!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
This visit proved to be awesome .. Many thanks Thad .. All Good Things to you and yours sir .. Neville
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