A Walk in the Sun

MendedFences27

A Walk in the Sun.



We went walking in the sunshine

though It was thirty degrees Fahrenheit

with a harsh wind

that was blowing in off the sea.

 

The air that filled our lungs 

and at times, would take our breath away

was refreshing and salty.

We welcomed it though we could feel

the chill in our bones 

and the rawness on our cheeks.

 

We still inhaled the briny aroma

of the breaking ocean.

Our covered ears could still hear

the lashing and crashing 

of the waves against the rocky coast 

and the concrete seawall.

 

We occasionally would stop to admire

the power of the battering sea.

It was massive in its view

and humbling in its strength.

We would seek shelter from the wind

on the leeward side of the performance center

that was built jutting out onto the sandy shore.

 

The promenade was nearly empty.

The arcades, restaurants, and Casino

were shuttered for the winter.

Since we had moved north some 50-60 miles

Into the state of New Hampshire

this beach became our favorite walking place.

Two and half miles of walkway, with benches and restrooms.

 

We would park midway 

and walk one half of the span 

then return to the parking lot. 

There was no charge for parking

this time of the year, but in the summer

It’s downright ransom-like.

 

On this particular day, the sea seemed 

more energetic and of higher tide than normal.

Being new to the area, we thought nothing of it.

We drove home and continued our normal routine

The following morning’s news broadcast

reported the massive flooding that occurred

at the very beach we had walked.

  • Author: MendedFences27 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 30th, 2024 21:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: True Story
  • Category: Nature
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  • User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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Comments4

  • Teddy.15

    We must never underestimate mother nature that's for sure, your imagery glorious and I'm so glad you were safe dear Phil, at least knowing now the dangers, unfortunately there are so many. A brilliant thought provoking piece. 🌹

  • Doggerel Dave

    You were potentially at the wrong place, but definitely at the right time, Phil.

    BTW Never heard "downright ransom-like" as a description of the competitive qualities of crowds before. Sums them up perfectly.

  • Goldfinch60

    Those walks in the cold can be very uplifting Phil, so glad you didn't go there later.

    Andy

  • Neville



    Blimey .. very lucky indeed .. a narrow escape and a bloomin good poem out of it to boot ..
    Makes one both think and realise we don't know what's around the next corner .. Neville



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