If There Wasn't A Price....?

Goldfinch60



They say that age is the price we pay for experience.

When we first find out as a child that floors are hard and

Hurt when you when you fall.

When parents yell as we get near the fire,  we end up in tears

Wondering if they love us.

 

As we get older our experiences grow and make us

Supposedly much wiser than we were before.

The biggest lessons we learn

Are from our many mistakes that we make as we go

Along life’s rocky road.

 

It’s not only age that pays for the curve of our learning.

We also deliberately take the choice that we know is wrong

Making a choice that we

Know is wrong in our hearts and minds but

Is right for others

 

If there wasn’t a price we wouldn’t know,

We’ve learned something.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 31st, 2024 00:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: You cannot teach experience.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 24
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Comments8

  • Neville



    this is absolutely spot on .. and in all respects . respect .. needed to be writ

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, glad you agree.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.
      Erm, what is the price of fish these days? Can 'Biggles' tell us?!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi.

        • orchidee

          You voting for 'Biggles'?!

        • 2781

          I am still learning!

          • Goldfinch60

            We always are 2781.

            Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            It is true that experience builds knowledge and character in many cases. Unfortunately others often don't see this until they too have passed the same way. Good write Andy.

            • Goldfinch60

              Very true soren and yes some just do not see it as they pass by.

              Andy

            • Teddy.15

              Ouch, sometimes those lessons hurt, wisdom at its finest dear Andy. 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                Most kind Teddy, thank you.

                Andy

              • John Prophet

                Wise words. That’s why I smile at the 30 somethings who think they have it all figured out!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you John. Yes they have no idea about life.

                  Andy

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Well writ, Andy.

                • David Wakeling

                  I think I learned something today.this poem is filled with a life time of wisdom.Well done

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Such kind comments David, thank you.

                    Andy



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