Alive

sorenbarrett

Have you ever watched a spider spin its web?

seen an ant find its way?

noticed the tide ebb

clouds turn white to gray

 

Have you seen a baby born

tasted rain

danced until morn

slept in a field of sugar cane?

 

If the answer is no

if you see no honey in the hive

if you never saw sprouts grow

look about to be alive

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 31st, 2024 04:36
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • 2781

    We can be so self absorbed that we miss the finer things of life.
    Although sleeping in a cane field (down here) can have its problems.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks for the read and comment it is valued

    • orchidee

      Good write SB.
      I've seen a trout - an old one - you know who! lol.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks Orchi appreciate the read and comment about the fish. lol

      • Teddy.15

        I'm very humbled to say I have actually done a lot of these things, I've also walked in the middle of a cloud phenomenal on a mountain. Beautiful dear sorrenbarret 🌹

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much Teddy for the review and comment it is most appreciated. I am lucky enough to live in a mountain house where I awake many mornings of the year in a cloud that covers mountainside. It truly is most wonderful.

        • Doggerel Dave

          Awareness of life itself - It may be the only one I have.

          Great in its simplicity, Soren.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Dave simple is me. Appreciate the read and comment.

          • Goldfinch60

            Some people just cannot be bothered to look at what is going on in life soren, I have.

            Andy

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you Gold for the review and comment. It is true that few people look at the details that make live so wonderful/

            • maybel

              a sweet one! will be waiting for more like these!..

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you so much for unearthing this one. Yes most of my poems are darker or more peppery but every once in a while I get a sweet tooth. I appreciate the visit.

              • NafisaSB

                lovely message there - need to remind self to look around and observe the beauty around us

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you so much for the read and very kind words they are most appreciated.

                  • NafisaSB

                    welcome - have a beautiful day



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