If one likes to keep hopelessness
and defeat in a wallet in their pocket
and whom seek comfort from
the Raven
rather than an Angel
I cannot help but wonder
does it simply demonstrate
that anything that wants to die
is surely already dead?
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Teddy.15 (
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Such a strong write here Teddy. You can wallow in misery or do your best to catch the sunlight. I know what I prefer. The ravens I associate with the dark and bloody history of the Tower of London. Give me the light and the angels every day. Such a meaningful write with sage advice in it too. Have a beautiful Sunday dear Teddy. 🌹
Dear Cassie, I actually have you and Melvin to thank for this freshly written this morning, take it as a massive compliment as it is, to both of you, if we cannot inspire eachother then we wouldn't be great writers. Thank you with all my heart, I love the comparison to the tower of London it's obviously in my genes, thank goodness. Happy Sunday dearest of Poet's 🌹
Most interesting as a concept and its wording enhances it. " anything that wants to die is surely already dead" Nicely done.
Good morning dear sorrenbarret thank you so much. 🌹
as powerful as I have ever read from you Teddy.
full of purpose and a little gem I reckon.
You helped inspire this dear Melvin, take it with a massive compliment because that is how I mean it. I wrote this just this morning and I absolutely love it a huge thank you dear Melvin, you and your poetry often inspired mine. 🌹
Powerful work. Yes, hope springs eternal and comes in the morning. I had many a hopeless night, thank God that is over. This spoke to me.
Well, we cannot let those things keep us in a prison of our own minds even if it's how we feel and through no fault of our own, it can make us who we are or break us, fabulous you made it through dearest Thomas, the best people in the world are those who had to learn for themselves. 🌹
So true. Thank you.
A strong voice for the light as opposed to the dark. Your conclusion is spot on.
As for me I'm with you all the way. Give me hope, life and the light over despair, darkness, and death, anytime. Enjoyed this inspiring poem. - Phil A.
Thank you so much dear Phil, always such a pleasure to hear from you. 100% light always🌹
Such true words Teddy, I often know that Angels are with me as they are with you.
Andy
Dearest Andy, such a kind thing to say. Thank you dear friend. 🌹
You speak the truth yet again Teddy. Faith in oneself and the light within always prevails. 🌹👍
Thank you so much dearest A.P we must always remember this, we can be dragged down or stay up and stay bright. Big hugs my dear friend. 🌹
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