It is what it is

sorenbarrett

A law that governs all

there's entropy in a fall

you can see it in an aging face

it pervades collapsing space

There's no going back in time

Words dissolve in written rhyme

All life begins and ends

A rule that never bends

 

Syntropy it seems

is built on a child's dreams

Love flowers and grows

soon to be covered in building snows

in a frozen world dead

stone pillows for our head

Dreams too melt away

with the breaking warmth of day

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2024 03:52
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write SB.
    Entropy's set in for KP - she's a 5 million year old trout. lol.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Orchi appreciate the revies

    • Teddy.15

      It is indeed what it is, beautifully to the point, thank you for this stark reminder. 🤣 I do love stone pillow, that's inspiring. Wonderful metaphor. 🌹

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much Teddy for the review and kind words.

      • Thomas W Case

        Powerful work.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Thomas for the read and kind words

        • sorenbarrett

          Thanks Teddy appreciate the review and kind words.

        • Goldfinch60

          May that warmth always shine in our hearts and minds soren.

          Andy

          • sorenbarrett

            Thanks Gold for the read and wish it is appreciated,

          • Neville



            and it aint what it aint .. makes perfect sense in a world seemingly on borrowed time .. again enjoyed .. N

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks Neville for the review I do appreciate the comment.



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