Oh, nine spheres of wonder
how beautiful you shine
lighting my heart
when I look up at night’s sky
you’re so far away
yet always in my dreams
when the sun goes to bed
and moon shines her beams
the way that Orion and the Saucepan does peer
behind clouds maybe, just maybe you’re near?
when I look up to you, on a warm summer's night
heart fluttering fiercely, I simply just sigh
even on nights, that I’m sad and alone
you, my stars in paradise
shine down from beyond.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Grief, loss, love, it's all a part of who we are as humans 💙
- Category: Love
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The stars will always shine on you dear Teddy. 🌹
Beautiful work sweet Teddy. Raw emotion.
Imagine that. Thank you my dear Thomas. 🌹
Maybe don't come to the antipodes, Teddy - could be dangerous, You would sigh yourself into a million pieces..... or perhaps you would revel in the mystery and glory of it all....
The deep emotional aspect of your piece is not lost on me, by the way....
Awe thank you dear Dave so kind, I've ways dreamed to see the aurora, did you know it was completely visible in London last month. I Love the sky. 🌹
This is so beautiful.
Amazing poem Teddy.15
Thank you so much 🌹
Beautiful message
Thank you so much for coming by to say. 🌹
Nothing like star gazing to connect us to our deepest emotions. An opportunity to lose ourselves in the quiet and kind night. Such beautiful expression dear Teddy. Love your posted image too.
Thank you dear Cassie. 🌹
Taken literally there are 7 planets excluding earth and the sun and the moon which could stand for the spheres of wonder but then you speak of constellations of which there are 88 visible from earth so I take this metaphorically. Orion the symbol of transition from life to death while the sauce pan I take to be the big dipper symbolizing the infinite, eternal giving guidance and enlightenment. Great images to "light my heart"
"you’re so far away
yet always in my dreams
when the sun goes to bed
and moon shines her beams"
takes on new meaning from a soul in darkness guided by Isis light of the night. Finished with a great ending
"even on nights, that I’m sad and alone
you, my stars in paradise
shine down from beyond."
It shows that hope is present in this guiding light. Brilliant!
Wow thank you dear sorrenbarret, I'm speaking of the dead my dead, those who have forever gone, so now they are my stars June is a month of great sorrow for me. you always see so much in my writes forever incredibly humbled Sir. Thank you. 🌹
The stars of love shine down on us all Teddy and may they always bring love and joy to us all.
An dy
Thank you dear Andy 🌹
Very lovely .. beautiful writing . Like your gentle way with words
Thank you dear poetess. 🌹
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