Eleven and A Half Minutes

Neville

Eleven and A Half Minutes

 

Memories are what remain

of times passed

and since this is irrefutable

I shall bequeath

to you my friend, a few of

   my very own ..

Indeed I have such a need

to fill the silent years

   with sorries and with prayers ..

Each one for you

   I owe you that much at least ..

And while there

is no need for accolades or

   compliments ..

When no other words will do

I want you to

   know I still love you like crazy ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 3rd, 2024 13:51
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Accidental Poet

    Nothing like a man who comes straight to the point. 😉👍

    • Neville



      thanks for your understanding .. it is duly noted and muchly appreciated ... Neville

    • Doggerel Dave

      So a memoir (with this dedication) is on its way, is it, Neville?

      • Neville



        Never say neva .. maybe .. Neville

      • Thomas W Case

        Beautiful.

        • Neville



          Cheers, Thomas

        • Cassie58

          An outpouring of love and an apology for the silent years. And prayers too for healing. Sounds like a reconciliation.of lovers and the title must be of special significance. Love over conflict , satisfaction for the heart and soul. Words of adoration. Very nicely expressed Neville.

          • Neville



            thank you Cassie .. Neville

          • orchidee

            Reminds more of that silent piece 4 mins 33 seconds.
            You wish I wouldn't sing for 11 and half minutes each day? That would be a start to stop me singing! lol.

            • Neville



              I am sure you are write .. nuff said .. in fact too much ..

            • Alan R

              Touching!

              • Neville


                How very kind .. ta .. Neville

              • Goldfinch60

                Love never dies Neville.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  Yet sadly, those who are and so much, do .. don't they .. Neville

                • Thad Wilk

                  A touching and
                  emotional poem,
                  thoughts and
                  message indeed.. 😢
                  Wonderfully woven
                  and my pleasure
                  to read!!
                  Much enjoyed, peace ✌️
                  Thad

                  • Neville


                    I am honoured that you took some time out to consider this particular little scribble Thad .. Very muchly appreciated sir .. Thank you so much .. Neville



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