Born of mud
climbed light's ladder to the sun
squeezed from a tube
rope of twisted hopes
Something inside swelling
seeking a green release
burst this corporal shell
fallen stem raising
empty hull
used discarded
essence dissipated
vacuous air
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: June 6th, 2024 04:01
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 18
- Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
Comments4
KP's born of mud - mud-packs!
I saw her wearing one and said 'You look 10 times better today, my dear!' lol.
Nothing new I thought that man was made form the dirt. Thanks for reading Orchi
lol I find this hilarious, wonderful to smile with you dear sorrenbarret 🌹
Thanks so much Teddy yes I am glad that it made you smile.
Intriguing write soren.
Andy
Thanks Andy appreciate the read and comment.
Funnily enough, I found this seriously compelling .. Neville
Thanks so much Neville I appreciate your review this was just one of those mental belches that happen from time to time.
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