She sees him in passing
thumps to the chest
eyes to the floor
to message weighs heavy
to call weighs more
It was a love she will never hold again
it was deep, it was real
but she closed the door
he deserved better
he deserved more
as she sits deep inside herself
no value and in the dark
her soul cries
she isn't worth it
she isn't more
a piece of her dies
as she sits there waiting
with a smile she hides
KLJ
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KLJ (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 6th, 2024 22:57
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I think maybe she is worth it and I feel the weight transferred to her was actually his plan along. He failed her and pompously hides that with a chest thump that actually exposes him as the charlatan that slid the weight of his shortcomings into her. Perhaps her only fault is trusting a selfish fuck that tucks his problems and faults into the waistband of a goodhearted soul that wants to believe and he abused her kindness.
Nice write goood read
Yes, I think so also. He dumped all his burdens on her, manipulated her into believing she was the problem.
Dig!
I felt the passion in your words! Thank you!
That’s cool you said that that.
Such a powerful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Thank You!
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