CARVING
There are those dislodged by misfortune that still must carve a path.
One man one case
barraged by weight of all the world’s wrath
Twisted strife, pure wickedness , that speaks to mythical duress joining the sharpened knife of heaviness
no more regrets did coalesce
while uncertainty stoked that blazing fire of hope shifting promises that interloped
He is not naive
Boldly quick to commit
his calloused veneer a symbol that he’d never quit
A sacred pact
regathered powers and
Steadied aim to plunge direct , With hardened heart, he’s hard to fool so he knew the saddest part.
Before him bare
She drew his stare
He dropped pretense and fed his caution to the storm
His vigor could save humanity , those alive and those yet born
Then maniacally like when Eve first Knew that Eden snake
A punished travail seared deep within , Twas Satan’s Laugh that made him shake ,
a silent scream and teary nod, his heart and body barely whole, a disaster uninvited, has exploded the atoms of his soul
Bobby O
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Bobby O (
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- Comment from author about the poem: He finally resisted.
- Category: Fable
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Powerful work, Bobby.
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Crikey O'Riley that good eh' .. a real rollercoaster of a read and mightily enjoyed my literary brother .. Neville 🎵🎶
This is quite a insightful description of one man's life.Made me think.Well done
I’ll run the first leg, Case, Nev, and You decide who’s anchor.
What disaster we survived, Bobby-cool and devilish work …
Thanks. It’s about having conviction to go all in on what may be your Greatest love Sort of a Damn the torpedoes , full speed ahead committment.
I got you—just published after a while-also message me on project update-I’m game and happy independence
A deep and powerful write that courageously spews forth its message in words of darkness. I really liked this write Bobby.
Your kind words mean a bunch and what’s even better is you took the time to break it down and understand it.
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