A stinging orgasm
Banquet turned to dust
Dancing on razorblades
Sleeping in a bed of fishhooks
Acid blood dissolves the years
Salty tears over open wounds
drip into pools of bled dreams
rancid in the grime of time
Once friends
two cats tied tail to tail
hung over a clothesline face to face
Words disembowel
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: June 8th, 2024 04:45
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Comments5
every now and then & for good reason, words fail me ..
my visit here today, left me dumb .. and was indeed, such an occasion ..
exquisitely poemed .. sorenbarrett
.. Neville
Words can not express how much your comment means and how appreciated it is. I thank you humbly.
A catty write?!
Thanks Orchi a bit catty I guess I was hoping for purr-fect but it didn't happen. Appreciate the read friend.
Very uncomfortable to say the least, wow I could read this a thousand times. 🌹
Thanks Teddy sorry to hear I made you uncomfortable and especially that you would choose to be so so many times. I do appreciate the review and comment friend
No need to be sorry I love when I feel emotions when I read it's a compliment to your work. 🌹
Intriguing words soren,
Andy
Thanks Andy a write that was just clawing to get out.
I love your word choices in this
An excellent example of how to use language
Great writing
Thank you so much peto for the read and most kind words of encouragement.
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